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...O.o From summer 2007.Rate this Poem
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Created:
10/15 2007
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350
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Other
My Poems
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20
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Everybody is somebody. |
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33
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Backwards Society. |
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25
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Sick |
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18
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It's my madness |
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19
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Bitter Rage |
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19
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You are the key to my Insanity. |
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18
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Beauty grows from cruelty. |
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23
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Little Cancer Sticks |
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42
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Little Girl Child. |
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31
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A test of Colour |
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28
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Release |
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32
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Little Thoughts. |
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4
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Alone |
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4
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Simple yet confusing |
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2
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Reality |
Little Thoughts.
Little Thoughts.
They dance through my mind.
Contorted shapes appear before my eyes.
Evil beings in disguise.
It's easy for me to see,
Just how simple things could be.
If these little thoughts,
would only cease their endless patter
Even if just for a little while.
Perhaps i'd be madder,
there'd be nothing sadder.
But it carries on so.
I just can't seem to let them go.
These little thoughts.
Which forever waltz through my mind.
| On March 22nd 2008 username685 Said: |
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| wow thats great |
| On October 17th 2007 Pikkakard Said: |
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| The rhyming is perfect. GREAT poem. Would love your comments on some of mine if you have time. :) |
| On October 16th 2007 barbaraew Said: |
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| great writting |
| On October 16th 2007 conroecowgirl1 Said: |
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| this is really great i like it :) |
| On October 16th 2007 tswieberg Said: |
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| This is really good. |
| On October 16th 2007 Smarties4 Said: |
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| awesome |
| On October 15th 2007 California1516 Said: |
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| nice work..i think everyone can relate to this:) |
| On October 15th 2007 TanyaCheri Said: |
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| nice job! |
| On October 15th 2007 shellycuk Said: |
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| sweet. i like it |
| On October 15th 2007 transgenic Said: |
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| There's something really calm and peaceful about this...Nice work! |
| On October 15th 2007 jjsmomm682006 Said: |
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| cool. I like it |
| On October 15th 2007 sochula777 Said: |
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| This is very nice! love it! |
| On October 15th 2007 mrskritter Said: |
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| great work |


