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darkmatters

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Thoughts. Comment and rate please. =]

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Created: 06/09 2007

Views: 291

Category: Passion

My Poems

+ 20	Everybody is somebody.
+ 33	Backwards Society.
+ 25	Sick
+ 18	It's my madness
+ 19	Bitter Rage
+ 19	You are the key to my Insanity.
+ 18	Beauty grows from cruelty.
+ 23	Little Cancer Sticks
+ 42	Little Girl Child.
+ 31	A test of Colour
+ 28	Release
+ 32	Little Thoughts.
+ 4	Alone
+ 4	Simple yet confusing
+ 2	Reality

Backwards Society.

The clever act stupid.

People pretend they are something they are not.

All to fit in with society's standards.

Is this such a great world we inhabit?

Have we truly evolved- in every sense of the world?

Or are we simply the rejects of nature.

Nature's imbeciles.

Killing ourselves slowly.

With rage and with hate.

We close our mouths.

And swallow our words.

Keep our heads down low.

And keep our eyes closed tight.

In the hope that everything might turn out alright.

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On August 28th 2008 DocJRoberts Said:


	I really like this one... it's so damn true it's scary

On June 28th 2007 johntyrel Said:


	i adore this... everyone cares... no one does anything.... you touch on the lethargy that we have fallen into... sickening lethargy... not just them.... me too.. most of us...

On June 26th 2007 Glork21 Said:


	great job!

On June 25th 2007 Pikkakard Said:


	An interesting idea. Well written, too.

On June 25th 2007 Lookin4TruLuv Said:


	Interesting P.O.V.

On June 24th 2007 joker4lifead Said:


	really good

On June 24th 2007 Myst222 Said:


	excellent

On June 24th 2007 JWalker2406 Said:


	Love it!

On June 17th 2007 DocJRoberts Said:


	I sense cynicism... and I like :-)

On June 17th 2007 R0ckNRoll Said:


	Aww! :D I LOVE IT!

On June 16th 2007 Toxxicduck Said:


	Its so sadly true! Well whatever, what can we do?

On June 9th 2007 AlexINTJ Said:


	that's brilliant--and so completely true. I loved this!

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