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Created:
06/18 2007
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Little Cancer Sticks
I hate people who smoke.
I preach this day and night.
But I am alone.
A ten pack I devour.
It’s cloudy relief floating down my throat.
It’s thick fog fills the air,
And commands all space in my lungs.
For a brief moment I am alive inside.
I hate people who smoke.
I preach this day and night.
These little cancer sticks will get you in the end. My friends all smoke – just a harmless little joke. A petty addiction.
But I my friend smoke in hope of my end.
I suck greedily on those little cancer sticks, doom drawing ever closer to me.
I preach this day and night.
But I am alone.
A ten pack I devour.
It’s cloudy relief floating down my throat.
It’s thick fog fills the air,
And commands all space in my lungs.
For a brief moment I am alive inside.
I hate people who smoke.
I preach this day and night.
These little cancer sticks will get you in the end. My friends all smoke – just a harmless little joke. A petty addiction.
But I my friend smoke in hope of my end.
I suck greedily on those little cancer sticks, doom drawing ever closer to me.
Please Login to post comments| On July 17th 2007 PoeticPang Said: |
| very simple and to the point poem,, the repititioned lines are great and i love the color effects,, black and grey and red,,, nice,,, reminds me of cigarettes,,, hmmmmm,,, very interesting poem,, great job!~~~~~~~~~~Pang |
| On June 26th 2007 Glork21 Said: |
| good job! I think cigarettes are gross! |
| On June 24th 2007 Myst222 Said: |
| good one |
| On June 24th 2007 lisajoann88 Said: |
| very very good! |
| On June 21st 2007 horrorqueenusa Said: |
| wow.. |
