Little Girl Child.

On September 4th 2007 leslie91126 Said:

	sometimes, to make the biggest impact, and to get our point across, the best way to do is to not say things. strange as it may sound i think you executed this perfectly. there is to much emotions to some up in one poem. well done

On June 29th 2007 alanahm Said:

	that is deep....i like it hunn...you should read, comment, and rate mine i would appreciate...i would give you some pointers but if you read mine then you will see why i will not....well keep it up...you will just get better and better!!! great job chick!! two thumbs up!!!

On June 28th 2007 Jush Said:

	it has very good imagery... i like the poem except its just like randomly girl dies.. i mean i wanna know how she died.. i get it up to that point then im like... :S.... lol u kno?

On June 27th 2007 krista32890 Said:

	Why did she die?! It was sad, but I like it. Short and sweet.

On June 27th 2007 trigunlover22 Said:

	*tear* aw that breaks my heart this is a true poem tr poems come from the heart

On June 26th 2007 sqgirl1010 Said:

	it was okay but kinda short

On June 26th 2007 youwant2eat Said:

	sad, poor little girl... but its good. :]

On June 26th 2007 TheBranster Said:

	good poem, well sad, but you know what i means. good but sad. my sugestions wouldnt be much, if any. just keep doing poems and such. I think there good, and over time you might improve, if not, thats also ok. there already great.

On June 26th 2007 peterdrummond Said:

	suggestions for what? i cant - its perfect i really like the use of imagery (cant spell) of the smile its really good congrats

On June 26th 2007 carsyn29 Said:

	this is really good...i really dont have any suggestions

On June 25th 2007 demonsorrows Said:

	good good boober :P sad, creative in it's own way. colors ooooh. children die everyday, so it's a remembrance.

On June 25th 2007 bubbles1224 Said:

	very sad, but very creative. comment mine! lol

On June 25th 2007 Stoudt18 Said:

	really good but you coul've made it longer.

On June 25th 2007 individulsong Said:

	it's good. The poem is definitely filled with emotion, but my suggestion is that you slow down the face just a little. Something as sad and as poignat as this... well, it was so quick that it kind of slapped me in the face, and I wasn't able to fully appreciate the beauty in the saddness.. you know? I hope that helps. It is well done, though, no doubt.

On June 25th 2007 Aegle Said:

	thats sad ;(

On June 25th 2007 Toxxicduck Said:

	its short and sad, but deep! i like it

On June 25th 2007 xxcassiejayxx Said:

	sad but good

On June 25th 2007 johntyrel Said:

	i like the flow..u could go very deep and pull heart strings with this.. if you spent some serious alone time listening to evanesance lol

On June 25th 2007 JWalker2406 Said:

	It's sad but pretty good! The thing is, is that it happens everyday...