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I felt I did really good on this one. =\Rate this Poem
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Created:
06/03 2008
Views:
119
Category:
Passion
My Poems
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10
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Life. |
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8
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Out of This City |
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7
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Here I Come |
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4
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Today. |
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18
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Whisper |
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2
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Trying but Failing |
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3
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Blank Confusion |
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6
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Running Away |
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4
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Do you? |
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6
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Done and Over With |
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3
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Friends |
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21
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Never Die |
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15
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I try |
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Done |
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You are my best friend |
Everlasting
His lips against mine
Is my perfect summer joy
His everlasting scent
Picks up my breath and sweeps it away
His fierce romantic eyes give off the scent
of a perfect bloody rose
His pain is my december
His heart is my soul
He is everlasting
He is chemical
He poisons my very vains
Poisons them to the core
His perfect touch sends shivers
up my spine
His perfect hug makes me never
want to let him go
He sees me in his eyes
as I see him in mine
forever
His muscular body
and his perfect scent
He is my december
and I shall never let him go
Please Login to post comments| On June 13th 2008 drummajorpod Said: |
| You describe things very well. =] Good work! |
| On June 11th 2008 PROBETRO Said: |
| so december is the guy
of ur summer joy. weird 2 think off .overall ok. |
| On June 11th 2008 allisonpaige92 Said: |
| this is really amazing =] i hope you keep writing. sorry i havent been on in a while i dont get on here much anymore |
| On June 6th 2008 Thugnastay227 Said: |
| I like this. this is indeed a good poem. i like it. interesting read. u definately have a knack for poetry |
| On June 5th 2008 moosegurl01 Said: |
| good poem |
| On June 5th 2008 ReneakaKC Said: |
| Holy COW!!! this is like amazing! I LIKE THE LAST 2 VERSES. dude ur amazing... dudette?... haha seriously ur very very talented GREAT JOB! =D |
| On June 4th 2008 megaeden Said: |
| hmmm this was intresting |
| On June 4th 2008 xHickChick789x Said: |
| aww... this is amazing! I love it! I can relate to it. Great job! |
| On June 4th 2008 kissofasia Said: |
| awwww,sweetest darling...i like it.Thanks for reading my poems. |
