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Created: 06/18 2008
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The Last Day of School

Okay. So here I am sitting down

Watching a movie that plays without sound.

I re-wind and pause

and laugh it off,

I cry and bawl and I click 'stop'.

I look at the memories I created

with all of you,

I think back to the chaos

the fighitng and the

broken hearts too.

I keep re-winding and pressing play,

over and over again,

Because I don't want our time to end,

even though others are about to begin.

The movie of our memories play

without stopping,

I try to re-wind them again

but they keep on progressing.

I don't know what to do,

I have broke the remote,

I hold the only copy

the one that is now broke.

So now the movie continues to play,

I cry and cry

I want to stay.

But times come and go

they never stay,

I have to leave you all

while you all stay.

I don't know what this feeling is

but it is stronger than love,

perhaps it is freindship

or all of the above?

Either way, I do not know,

But if it's true,

watch my feelings grow.

Even though we must split up,

and will never see each other again,

I will cry my last tear when our

new time begins.

 

 

Dedicated to:

  • Francisco
  • James
  • Kevin
  • Shanice
  • Katie
  • Michele
  • Martha
  • Maylaysia
  • Mona
  • Autumn
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On September 16th 2008 EeyoreRulez Said: 
EeyoreRulez very good! this year s my last year of middle school. =( but very good! =P
On July 29th 2008 UnSane420 Said: 
UnSane420 i've been out of middle school for a while but i like the emotions you played on the words i really love this poem good job!
On July 15th 2008 Univarsity Said: 
Univarsity Pretty darn good I must admit. Good job :D
On June 24th 2008 xXXxjuicyxXxXX Said: 
xXXxjuicyxXxXX its'e pretty good, the only critique i would give is, never start off your poems w/ the word "okay".
On June 24th 2008 m3gG1e9o0 Said: 
m3gG1e9o0 love the feeling on this, but the writing quality wasn't quite as good as i've seen in some of your other poems. i wish my last day of middle school could have been like that for me. 8th grade was the worst year of my life. it sucked ass. big time. and don't worry. high school is the shits. in good and bad ways. lol. ima b a junior next year!
On June 24th 2008 depressionsux6 Said: 
depressionsux6 i like this----i just got out of middle school myself---now im--we're--starting high school---i had aot of memories---my frist kiss---my first fight----the first time i was threatiend by a boy---my frist real relationship...my first heart break...i cryed on the last day of school cause my best friend is going to early collage---a few of my friends failed---my guy best friend is going to a diff. high school----a bunch of my friends are going to a diff. high school---now i wanna cry...T.T I MISS ALL OF MY FRIENDS---ALL OF THE MEMORIES THAT STILL HAUNT ME...IM GONNA MISS HAVEING A GOOD REASON TO ACT THE WAY I ACT---BUT NOW THAT ITS TIME FOR HIGH SCHOOL---IM FORCED TO GROW UP...
On June 22nd 2008 Thugnastay227 Said: 
Thugnastay227 i can sorta relate to this. jr high for me was ok and i was sorta feeling this way and higs school for me was not so great so and i dont miss a single moment of it...hopefully urs will be better
On June 21st 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said: 
xXPunkGirl09Xx i agree with holllywood2 but this year now i am senior so i will get a lot of tissue to cry because i am been with friends and teachers for years. thats okay you will be fine. =]
On June 20th 2008 BreJroxURsox1 Said: 
BreJroxURsox1 it's cute. it's ok, i don't want to leave middle school either.
On June 19th 2008 tiffany1058 Said: 
tiffany1058 i love it my last day in middle school was pretty hard too but that was 2 years ago sooo it does get better
On June 19th 2008 xHickChick789x Said: 
xHickChick789x oh wow... it was my last year in middle schoo too. I can relate to it. *cries* Very nice!
On June 19th 2008 moosegurl01 Said: 
moosegurl01 really great poem
On June 19th 2008 ReneakaKC Said: 
ReneakaKC OMG this makes me think of graduation. *tear* GREAT JOB. trully inspiring.
On June 19th 2008 ilvuanudntcre Said: 
ilvuanudntcre :) touching, it nearly made me cry :) great poem
On June 19th 2008 kissofasia Said: 
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ohhhh,i'm sure they'll love it....I like it a lot.
On June 18th 2008 Hollwood2 Said: 
Hollwood2 this seems like something that would be more of a high school poem. although since its middle school it is a bit more unique. rateable 6.5/10