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The Last Day of School
Okay. So here I am sitting down
Watching a movie that plays without sound.
I re-wind and pause
and laugh it off,
I cry and bawl and I click 'stop'.
I look at the memories I created
with all of you,
I think back to the chaos
the fighitng and the
broken hearts too.
I keep re-winding and pressing play,
over and over again,
Because I don't want our time to end,
even though others are about to begin.
The movie of our memories play
without stopping,
I try to re-wind them again
but they keep on progressing.
I don't know what to do,
I have broke the remote,
I hold the only copy
the one that is now broke.
So now the movie continues to play,
I cry and cry
I want to stay.
But times come and go
they never stay,
I have to leave you all
while you all stay.
I don't know what this feeling is
but it is stronger than love,
perhaps it is freindship
or all of the above?
Either way, I do not know,
But if it's true,
watch my feelings grow.
Even though we must split up,
and will never see each other again,
I will cry my last tear when our
new time begins.
Dedicated to:
- Francisco
- James
- Kevin
- Shanice
- Katie
- Michele
- Martha
- Maylaysia
- Mona
- Autumn
| On September 16th 2008 EeyoreRulez Said: |
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| very good! this year s my last year of middle school. =( but very good! =P |
| On July 29th 2008 UnSane420 Said: |
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| i've been out of middle school for a while but i like the emotions you played on the words i really love this poem good job! |
| On July 15th 2008 Univarsity Said: |
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| Pretty darn good I must admit. Good job :D |
| On June 24th 2008 xXXxjuicyxXxXX Said: |
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| its'e pretty good, the only critique i would give is, never start off your poems w/ the word "okay". |
| On June 24th 2008 m3gG1e9o0 Said: |
| On June 24th 2008 depressionsux6 Said: |
| On June 22nd 2008 Thugnastay227 Said: |
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| i can sorta relate to this. jr high for me was ok and i was sorta feeling this way and higs school for me was not so great so and i dont miss a single moment of it...hopefully urs will be better |
| On June 21st 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said: |
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| i agree with holllywood2 but this year now i am senior so i will get a lot of tissue to cry because i am been with friends and teachers for years. thats okay you will be fine. =] |
| On June 20th 2008 BreJroxURsox1 Said: |
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| it's cute. it's ok, i don't want to leave middle school either. |
| On June 19th 2008 tiffany1058 Said: |
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| i love it my last day in middle school was pretty hard too but that was 2 years ago sooo it does get better |
| On June 19th 2008 xHickChick789x Said: |
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| oh wow... it was my last year in middle schoo too. I can relate to it. *cries* Very nice! |
| On June 19th 2008 moosegurl01 Said: |
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| really great poem |
| On June 19th 2008 ReneakaKC Said: |
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| OMG this makes me think of graduation. *tear*
GREAT JOB. trully inspiring. |
| On June 19th 2008 ilvuanudntcre Said: |
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| :) touching, it nearly made me cry :) great poem |
| On June 19th 2008 kissofasia Said: |
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| ohhhh,i'm sure they'll love it....I like it a lot. |
| On June 18th 2008 Hollwood2 Said: |
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| this seems like something that would be more of a high school poem. although since its middle school it is a bit more unique. rateable 6.5/10 |


