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Created:
04/30 2008
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261
Category:
Pain
My Poems
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12
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My Dream of Love |
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21
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Suicidal Truth |
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13
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Definition of love |
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9
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stages of life |
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10
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Unpredicable Weather |
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10
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HELL |
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10
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Self Consciously |
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10
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Horrible World |
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8
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The Biggest Blessing |
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16
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Unfaithful |
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18
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LOVE LETTER - Please Read |
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7
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DECISION |
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10
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Hurt |
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10
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I Cry |
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This Game You've Been Playing |
So Hurt
With each sharp pain
I let out a cry
With the wounds you left
I just want to die
No visible wounds though
This I realize
The pain is from my heart
And the emptiness inside
You are gone, you left
You wanted to be free
I tried stopping you
But you didn’t want me
It didn’t matter to you
The feelings I bared
I am lost and alone
And oh so scared
Realizing my fears
And feeling much pain
Slipping under the covers
For I feel I am to blame
Mad and hating the world
for being so mean
I open my eyes
And realize it was a dream
Please Login to post comments| On September 18th 2008 mypoeticrage Said: |
| This one has a good flow to it |
| On August 17th 2008 ausjo Said: |
| So sad! Lovely poem though. |
| On July 31st 2008 luvhim4ever12 Said: |
| good job! |
| On July 18th 2008 haylesrox Said: |
| realli good...i love it |
| On June 4th 2008 ALIESAM21 Said: |
| wow..I love this it is great! Good job! |
| On May 6th 2008 mackenzie3893 Said: |
| Wow.Great one! I also love the twist. lol
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| On May 6th 2008 Bexi93 Said: |
| liking the twist at the end, bout it being a dream and u really good at describing the feeling about the heart ache because of the love loss |
| On May 5th 2008 Tigga16 Said: |
| Love the twist at the end. Great flow and details. |
| On May 5th 2008 mydragonlord Said: |
| Loved the twist!!! Brilliant!!! |
| On May 2nd 2008 crazygirl2313 Said: |
| nice job!!! |
| On May 2nd 2008 rikkutheif Said: |
| WH-HOO!!! IT WAS AWSOME! |
| On May 2nd 2008 XxbloodstainxX Said: |
| This is good, the only thing I don't like about it is the line, it loses the concept and the feel to it. But I'll give you a vote anyways. |
| On May 1st 2008 amshaye Said: |
| thank goodness it was a dream |
| On May 1st 2008 chickenbroth Said: |
| This is great. |
| On April 30th 2008 dropdeadsucka Said: |
| Dangg dude, nice job. =] |
| On April 30th 2008 xHickChick789x Said: |
| cool Very nice! |
| On April 30th 2008 speederspider Said: |
| I love all of it except the last line. It doesn't fit really. |
| On April 30th 2008 Thugnastay227 Said: |
| haha! what a twist....good job hun. |
