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dureall

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Inspired by Edgar Allen Poe

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Created: 03/06 2007

Views: 848

Category: Tragedy

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+ 64	Requem of One's Death from Fright.
+ 19	The Great Masterbater

Requem of One's Death from Fright.

As i stare outside my lair

I hear a faint chattering there,

Coming closer to my stead,

I realize then it's not in my head,

Chattering,battling,rattling,looming closer evermore,

I run to close my chamber door,

But i sense of a curiosity

As i wonder to myself, "what could it be?"

Louder and lounder the sound draws near

captivating all of my fear,

I open the door of my chamber hall

To if i can find the source of it all,

Nothing appears from the frightening call,

Rapping , tapping,and flapping somemore,

Quickly I close my chamber door,

And as i did with such a stammer,

My inners burst in a explosive manner,

And as i fall to the floor,

The rap, tap, flapping at my chamber door

Coming closer forever more

Filled with panic ,insanity sets in,

The racket draws louder , under my skin

I scream in terror,"what can this be!?"

"What is this horror eating at me?"

As i lay there floor to my back,

My mind grows weak as I fade to black

The sound goes a swiftly from which it came

Dimming as fast as a flickering flame..

As i die upon the floor,

the rapping flap, tapping grows silent

forevermore

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On February 23rd 2008 ReneakaKC Said:


	I dont' get it... but if it's from you it's gotta be something really GREAT!!!

On November 3rd 2007 AMC500 Said:


	awesome, very introspective

On October 6th 2007 EvilRaven9892 Said:


	I love that feeling it gives me! Man you amaze me AGAIN! You are just awsome!

On August 12th 2007 robespierre96 Said:


	coooool man !!!!!!!!!!!!!

On June 8th 2007 joabizz Said:


	I really appriciated it, as I read it my heart was racing along with the words,,,, great writing..you are very talented!! and thanks for your comments! :)

On June 6th 2007 Qurmudjin Said:


	One of the best The Raven inspired pieces I've read. I'd love to see you do Poe in one of your drawings...

On May 24th 2007 november38577 Said:


	The Raven is an amazing poem....I can totally see how you would be inspired to write something as great!

On May 12th 2007 NeutralR1 Said:


	Very good work..

On April 30th 2007 pink23fairie Said:


	nice writing!

On April 25th 2007 hackerlord Said:


	very great.. and way to go with the coloring.. keep up the writing

On April 23rd 2007 Lookin4TruLuv Said:


	Amazing!!!!!!

On April 22nd 2007 mrskritter Said:


	cool

On April 22nd 2007 ausjo Said:


	Ooooooo spooky!

On April 21st 2007 freckliecreme Said:


	i really lik this! its really great.

On April 19th 2007 FamousOne777 Said:


	Wow this is great work brotha, keep it coming.

On April 18th 2007 marlana79 Said:


	I think it's really good, and I would have to agree with everyone else, it's alot Like Edgar Alan Poe. And to think he's famous. I like it :)

On April 14th 2007 chickenbroth Said:


	I liked it, your more talented when it comes to art though, no offence.

On April 14th 2007 iluvtostito Said:


	that's really good. as i say this i know you've been told but that s\does sound like poe. very good. wow you're talented aren't you, artwork poetry and im sure more.

On April 9th 2007 mcfly999 Said:


	thats a pretty good one yourself. as everyones already said, it kinda does remind me of Poe.

On April 3rd 2007 knowlyfe Said:


	"Those who dream by day are cognizant of many things which escape those who dream only by night." - Edgar Allen Poe, favorite quote in the world. this is cool too.

On March 25th 2007 ashamee Said:


	I was thinking the same thing while reading... Poe's The Raven.. one of my favorites. I love it!

On March 10th 2007 Javellef Said:


	Impressive writing! You have captured the essence of Poe's writing with this poem.

On March 7th 2007 Marxalot Said:


	Its a great poem...kind of reminds me of Edgar Alan Poe's-The Raven. Great job!!

On March 6th 2007 dureall Said:


	When I created this I used a black background I wish I had that option here.

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