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My beautiful.. why am I so sadRate this Poem
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Created:
03/10 2009
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461
Category:
Love
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Why Am I So Sad
My beautiful.. why am I so sad,
When did I go wrong,
Did I say something I shouldn't have,
Or is it.. that together we don't belong.
I feel lost in my agony,
In so much despair,
I don't even have the words,
Feeling each piece of me tear.
My thoughts are only of us,
Give me hope.. don't let me down,
Give me a reason not to give up,
Tell me.. what in me you found.
Look for me,
Hold me by the hand,
Comfort me,
Show me you understand.
Tell me something,
Before I can't anymore,
Help me see,
What all this is for.
Just give me a reason to smile,
I can take care of the rest,
Show me to you I do matter,
And truly i'm blessed.
Do I light up your fire,
Do we love each other the same,
Am I the match that ignites you,
And in your heart the flame.
| On May 26th 2009 envymehaterz95 Said: |
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| GREAT POEM!!!!!!!!!!!!! LUV IT!!!!!!!!!! dats all I can say |
| On April 2nd 2009 Angel089890 Said: |
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| love the last paragraph again! i love all your work, it has so much meaning and emotion when i read it! another congrats on a job well done!! ^_^ |
| On March 15th 2009 DarkSide1477 Said: |
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| i really enjoyed the last stanza, guess im jsut a pyro |
| On March 14th 2009 bingobritney Said: |
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| awww i really like this its so lovely xxx |
| On March 12th 2009 MCRsLover Said: |
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| soso amazing! |
| On March 11th 2009 keegan4606 Said: |
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| wow your poems are AMAZING! i love reading them! |
| On March 11th 2009 Smarties4 Said: |
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| Great write :) |
| On March 10th 2009 lardpiles Said: |
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| BEAUTIFUL LIKE ALWAYS. another great and inspiring poem from elvira. |
| On March 10th 2009 ToastRocks333 Said: |
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| this reminds me of me =[ u should check out my poem, Love love love |
| On March 10th 2009 transgenic Said: |
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| Love it! |
| On March 10th 2009 Sunloverz Said: |
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| This is BEAUTIFUL.
Really , you should be proud |
| On March 10th 2009 kaitlinlovesk Said: |
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| I love this so ture and sad ! :( i just love it! |
| On March 10th 2009 bowzlady1 Said: |
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| You've outdone yourself! BEAUTIFUL! |
| On March 10th 2009 SomeoneTGSN Said: |
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| I really caught the feeling in this one, another great piece! |
| On March 10th 2009 dbGRizZlY Said: |
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| Great Work! I also enjoy the references... |
| On March 10th 2009 daddyX21 Said: |
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| i really like it!!!!! keep them comin |
| On March 10th 2009 robespierre96 Said: |
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| wow this shows true anxe at anothers control.cool how the emotion is so real.great job and well versed also! |
| On March 10th 2009 muse4apoem Said: |
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| Very beautiful and heartfelt. :) |
| On March 10th 2009 NitneyRenee Said: |
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| Very good... each stanza kind of has a strength of it's own. Nicely written and I can relate. Love it! |
| On March 10th 2009 vrudy504 Said: |
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| Very Very sad... You expressed it beautifully!! |
| On March 10th 2009 xxxshylaxxx Said: |
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| i really can relate to this very good plz check out my new poem 'Love' |
| On March 10th 2009 U2M3 Said: |
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| With this... you brought tears to my eyes. Beautiful! |


