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My beautiful.. why am I so sad

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Created: 03/10 2009
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Category: Love

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Why Am I So Sad

My beautiful.. why am I so sad,
When did I go wrong,
Did I say something I shouldn't have,
Or is it.. that together we don't belong.

 

I feel lost in my agony,
In so much despair,
I don't even have the words,
Feeling each piece of me tear.

 

My thoughts are only of us,
Give me hope.. don't let me down,
Give me a reason not to give up,
Tell me.. what in me you found.

 

Look for me,
Hold me by the hand,
Comfort me,
Show me you understand.

 

Tell me something,
Before I can't anymore,
Help me see,
What all this is for.

 

Just give me a reason to smile,
I can take care of the rest,
Show me to you I do matter,
And truly i'm blessed.

 

Do I light up your fire,
Do we love each other the same,
Am I the match that ignites you,
And in your heart the flame.

 

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On May 26th 2009 envymehaterz95 Said: 
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GREAT POEM!!!!!!!!!!!!! LUV IT!!!!!!!!!! dats all I can say
On April 2nd 2009 Angel089890 Said: 
Angel089890 love the last paragraph again! i love all your work, it has so much meaning and emotion when i read it! another congrats on a job well done!! ^_^
On March 15th 2009 DarkSide1477 Said: 
DarkSide1477 i really enjoyed the last stanza, guess im jsut a pyro
On March 14th 2009 bingobritney Said: 
bingobritney awww i really like this its so lovely xxx
On March 12th 2009 MCRsLover Said: 
MCRsLover soso amazing!
On March 11th 2009 keegan4606 Said: 
keegan4606 wow your poems are AMAZING! i love reading them!
On March 11th 2009 Smarties4 Said: 
Smarties4 Great write :)
On March 10th 2009 lardpiles Said: 
lardpiles BEAUTIFUL LIKE ALWAYS. another great and inspiring poem from elvira.
On March 10th 2009 ToastRocks333 Said: 
ToastRocks333 this reminds me of me =[ u should check out my poem, Love love love
On March 10th 2009 transgenic Said: 
transgenic Love it!
On March 10th 2009 Sunloverz Said: 
Sunloverz This is BEAUTIFUL. Really , you should be proud
On March 10th 2009 kaitlinlovesk Said: 
kaitlinlovesk I love this so ture and sad ! :( i just love it!
On March 10th 2009 bowzlady1 Said: 
bowzlady1 You've outdone yourself! BEAUTIFUL!
On March 10th 2009 SomeoneTGSN Said: 
SomeoneTGSN I really caught the feeling in this one, another great piece!
On March 10th 2009 dbGRizZlY Said: 
dbGRizZlY Great Work! I also enjoy the references...
On March 10th 2009 daddyX21 Said: 
daddyX21 i really like it!!!!! keep them comin
On March 10th 2009 robespierre96 Said: 
robespierre96 wow this shows true anxe at anothers control.cool how the emotion is so real.great job and well versed also!
On March 10th 2009 muse4apoem Said: 
muse4apoem Very beautiful and heartfelt. :)
On March 10th 2009 NitneyRenee Said: 
NitneyRenee Very good... each stanza kind of has a strength of it's own. Nicely written and I can relate. Love it!
On March 10th 2009 vrudy504 Said: 
vrudy504 Very Very sad... You expressed it beautifully!!
On March 10th 2009 xxxshylaxxx Said: 
xxxshylaxxx i really can relate to this very good plz check out my new poem 'Love'
On March 10th 2009 U2M3 Said: 
U2M3 With this... you brought tears to my eyes. Beautiful!