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Created: 08/20 2009
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Category: Pain

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Every Time

Broken Promise

It wasn't just once,
You did it over & over again,
You enjoyed every moment,
But now... you want to explain.

What were you thinking,
You played me for a fool,
You crossed every line,
You broke every rule.

I trusted every word,
How stupid was I,
Each night I stood up,
To never receive a single reply.

You didn't just break my heart,
You destroyed my life entire,
I thought I knew you then,
Now... you are just a liar.

I'm trapped in a room that has no key,
No traces of a smile or happiness you stole,
It was an illusion of you and me,
That faded slowly... to your control.

Thank you for the memories,
Of a love that didn't exist,
For every broken promise,
Every temptation you could never resist.

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On January 13th 2010 elvira2196 Said: 
elvira2196 Thank you for all your comments I should be writing soon again :)
On December 10th 2009 DemonzR4eva Said: 
DemonzR4eva You are very talanted... never stop writing
On September 2nd 2009 CassandraP15 Said: 
CassandraP15 this is good and true
On September 1st 2009 suknenesan1 Said: 
suknenesan1 WOW this dude sounds like a jerk i love the emotion
On August 29th 2009 muse4apoem Said: 
muse4apoem Why are all these poems that I'm reading are about break ups today? Gah I'm in the process of one right now and it hurts so bad!
On August 23rd 2009 lovin5life Said: 
lovin5life wow.that's deep, very heart touching and felt...
On August 21st 2009 deshanna13 Said: 
deshanna13 Amazing!!
On August 20th 2009 TruSouthern Said: 
TruSouthern I gotta say you do the sad emotion very well
On August 20th 2009 babeinlove1114 Said: 
babeinlove1114 that is great.. check out my poem "The Rude Awakening Of A Broken Heart." lol
On August 20th 2009 lisaljb Said: 
lisaljb Ahhh you're mking me sad!
On August 20th 2009 NitneyRenee Said: 
NitneyRenee wow, very emotion-filled. great job!
On August 20th 2009 sassyrockchick Said: 
sassyrockchick awesome!!
On August 20th 2009 mrsdh Said: 
mrsdh i really like this one, its so deep
On August 20th 2009 XxShadyBlackxX Said: 
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this is oh so very true
On August 20th 2009 Lukegirl4life Said: 
Lukegirl4life Man I love that.
On August 20th 2009 Poglu Said: 
Poglu Wow... talk about a slap in the face in the form of verses... Amazingly written!
On August 20th 2009 U2M3 Said: 
U2M3 You always have the ability to bring tears to my eyes and I'm able to feel the emotion expressed every time you write. Keep writing!
On August 20th 2009 vrudy504 Said: 
vrudy504 Wow... Very sad and powerful at the same time!