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Created:
08/20 2009
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222
Category:
Pain
My Poems
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I missed you.......... |
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What if.............. |
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You are............ |
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Why..... |
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When did I lose you... |
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I begin my story..... |
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I love you, It hurts |
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Between You and I |
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Where are you now |
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You And Him |
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Since I've Been Here |
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Have We Met |
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Forget |
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My Love |
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Every Time |
Broken Promise
It wasn't just once,
You did it over & over again,
You enjoyed every moment,
But now... you want to explain.
What were you thinking,
You played me for a fool,
You crossed every line,
You broke every rule.
I trusted every word,
How stupid was I,
Each night I stood up,
To never receive a single reply.
You didn't just break my heart,
You destroyed my life entire,
I thought I knew you then,
Now... you are just a liar.
I'm trapped in a room that has no key,
No traces of a smile or happiness you stole,
It was an illusion of you and me,
That faded slowly... to your control.
Thank you for the memories,
Of a love that didn't exist,
For every broken promise,
Every temptation you could never resist.
| On January 13th 2010 elvira2196 Said: |
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| Thank you for all your comments I should be writing soon again :) |
| On December 10th 2009 DemonzR4eva Said: |
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| You are very talanted... never stop writing |
| On September 2nd 2009 CassandraP15 Said: |
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| this is good and true |
| On September 1st 2009 suknenesan1 Said: |
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| WOW this dude sounds like a jerk i love the emotion |
| On August 29th 2009 muse4apoem Said: |
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| Why are all these poems that I'm reading are about break ups today? Gah I'm in the process of one right now and it hurts so bad! |
| On August 23rd 2009 lovin5life Said: |
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| wow.that's deep, very heart touching and felt... |
| On August 21st 2009 deshanna13 Said: |
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| Amazing!! |
| On August 20th 2009 TruSouthern Said: |
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| I gotta say you do the sad emotion very well |
| On August 20th 2009 babeinlove1114 Said: |
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| that is great.. check out my poem "The Rude Awakening Of A Broken Heart." lol |
| On August 20th 2009 lisaljb Said: |
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| Ahhh you're mking me sad! |
| On August 20th 2009 NitneyRenee Said: |
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| wow, very emotion-filled. great job! |
| On August 20th 2009 sassyrockchick Said: |
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| awesome!! |
| On August 20th 2009 mrsdh Said: |
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| i really like this one, its so deep |
| On August 20th 2009 XxShadyBlackxX Said: |
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| this is oh so very true |
| On August 20th 2009 Lukegirl4life Said: |
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| Man I love that. |
| On August 20th 2009 Poglu Said: |
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| Wow... talk about a slap in the face in the form of verses... Amazingly written! |
| On August 20th 2009 U2M3 Said: |
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| You always have the ability to bring tears to my eyes and I'm able to feel the emotion expressed every time you write. Keep writing! |
| On August 20th 2009 vrudy504 Said: |
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| Wow... Very sad and powerful at the same time! |


