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4 girls who thought it wont happen......Rate this Poem
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Created:
09/12 2007
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112
Category:
Passion
My Poems
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19
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Ending It all |
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12
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A Dream |
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11
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Was it right |
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10
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♥YoUr NaMe LiVeS oN |
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9
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TOUCHING A SOUL |
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13
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Love and reality |
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9
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How it feels to touch you |
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6
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cought in the moment |
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7
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death |
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8
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I hate... |
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8
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FEAR TO TOUCH U |
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4
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READ IN GODS NAME |
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2
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A Christmas Poem |
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2
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My own Sacrifice(EVAN'S POEM) |
cought in the moment
He gently kissed her lips,
brushed the hair off of her face with his fingertips,
She feels the joy and shock,
but at the same time she is overwhelmed with fear,
She has longed for this moment all of her life,
her cell phone rings but she doesn't answer,
instead she grips the bed tighter,
if feels so good but at the same time so wrong,
in the back of her mind she knows the chances,
she just doesn't care at the moment,
he kisses her neck and bites her ear,
at the same time he whisperin passionate things,
she feels a thrill of excitment,
she lets out a small faint noise,
then the door swings open,
there satands her mother,
she was the baby and just got coght in the moment....
| On November 30th 2007 MrKeesee Said: |
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| I love the way you write about things that actually happen to people. Very nice work. |
| On November 4th 2007 xoFrUiTlOoPxo Said: |
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| i love this one.
its real
the worries
all the thoughts going through ur head
i remember that time
that first time
how worried i was.
n e ways..
i like it alot! |
| On September 19th 2007 mcihellejane Said: |
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| I like this one-I know this exact feeling, when I was still living at home. Anyways, I like the way you build up to the ending! |
| On September 14th 2007 Mertown Said: |
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| good poem. :) im not a good poem reviewer kinda person but I thought this poem was good :) |


