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reality sux bad!

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Created: 05/17 2007
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Category: Love

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My own Sacrifice(EVAN'S POEM)

Was it right

I was sitting there,

thinking about what I had jsut said,

I knew it was the right thing,

but did he understand,

looking at the fire burning in his eyes,

I know his heart is breaking and slowly he will die,

It seems as if everything I do is wrong,

and his heart won't heal,

should I just move along,

I don't believe he took it so hard,

I thought I was just another girl,

But now I see I had the key to his heart,

life goes on,

that im sure of,

but should i stay stuck,

stuck on him,

or should i fall in love with someone else,

at least i should try,

god- I just can't hold on my feelings inside,

all I know is I can't go on living a lie.

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On December 17th 2007 kg108551 Said: 
kg108551 I can relate to this one! I agree w/MrKeesee
On November 30th 2007 MrKeesee Said: 
MrKeesee You have great insight into the human mind. It makes your writing very personal.
On June 6th 2007 xoFrUiTlOoPxo Said: 
xoFrUiTlOoPxo wow... all i can say is wow.. this is ah'mazing. i love it. its my favorite so far.
On May 17th 2007 GrowUp1 Said: 
GrowUp1 Good