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reality sux bad!Rate this Poem
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Created:
05/17 2007
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137
Category:
Love
My Poems
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19
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Ending It all |
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12
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A Dream |
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11
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Was it right |
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10
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♥YoUr NaMe LiVeS oN |
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9
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TOUCHING A SOUL |
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13
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Love and reality |
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9
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How it feels to touch you |
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6
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cought in the moment |
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7
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death |
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8
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I hate... |
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8
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FEAR TO TOUCH U |
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4
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READ IN GODS NAME |
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A Christmas Poem |
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My own Sacrifice(EVAN'S POEM) |
Was it right
I was sitting there,
thinking about what I had jsut said,
I knew it was the right thing,
but did he understand,
looking at the fire burning in his eyes,
I know his heart is breaking and slowly he will die,
It seems as if everything I do is wrong,
and his heart won't heal,
should I just move along,
I don't believe he took it so hard,
I thought I was just another girl,
But now I see I had the key to his heart,
life goes on,
that im sure of,
but should i stay stuck,
stuck on him,
or should i fall in love with someone else,
at least i should try,
god- I just can't hold on my feelings inside,
all I know is I can't go on living a lie.
| On December 17th 2007 kg108551 Said: |
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| I can relate to this one! I agree w/MrKeesee |
| On November 30th 2007 MrKeesee Said: |
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| You have great insight into the human mind. It makes your writing very personal. |
| On June 6th 2007 xoFrUiTlOoPxo Said: |
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| wow... all i can say is wow.. this is ah'mazing. i love it. its my favorite so far. |
| On May 17th 2007 GrowUp1 Said: |
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| Good |


