Hate In Me

On July 25th 2009 servantofall36 Said:

	Wow. Powerful.

On March 17th 2009 BuNnYoo7 Said:

	wow.... its soo short but its fucking amazing!!! i gotta give it to u gonzo. this is sweet.

On November 4th 2008 Benitto420 Said:

	Your mind is a scary place... then again, so is mine though

On October 14th 2008 Lovelyeyes0 Said:

	Hmhmmmm... I don't often feel this way... So I can't honestly say I can relate... I have lost and I have found... I feel the sorrow in this poem. It is well written... But more, I cannot say.

On October 3rd 2008 LeahLive Said:

	Feels like I've revisited someone else's mind. Same old place. Same old realm. Like an old horrorland that has been left running with the same old rides and other sorts of amusements for a few good years. I'm curious as to why is it such a chore for others to be a child again. To be creative again. With fresh ideas always brewing in a puerile mind. Why try so hard to be unique?

On September 19th 2008 lyrikaldisastr Said:

	has a nice flow...ur tryin to say ur mind is like all crazy right?

On September 7th 2008 ddiana3 Said:

	omg. its soo good but i can just imagine a clown saying this. lol. Its really good though. =)

On July 20th 2008 muse4apoem Said:

	This is one of my favorites from you! mcihellejane has the best comment. Wonderful work! ~Kudos~

On June 25th 2008 xX1ncINalifeXx Said:

	coool

On March 13th 2008 Kep89 Said:

	i love it lol

On March 3rd 2008 mcihellejane Said:

	I like it. I can almost hear the carnival guy saying step right up, don't be afraid....Anyhow, I like how you included the line "I wish for you a different fate" That makes me feel better :) But yeah, it's a nice little write!

On February 29th 2008 AshleyXxPiano Said:

	awesome.

On February 26th 2008 EvilRaven9892 Said:

	wowzers amazzing!

On February 24th 2008 gonzo4201 Said:

	I felt like some kind of carnival barker when I was writing this one, but it is one of my favorites

On February 24th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said:

	Really good~ I love your style on this one~ the whole let me show you around my mind line. I just like it.

On February 20th 2008 joabizz Said:

	very good...

On February 19th 2008 seekerovtruth Said:

	I do agree with Amerath that I like your use of punctuation but I think it has plenty of content. Short but to the point. Moral of the story. Don't be messin around in gonzo's head! :)

On January 8th 2008 Amerath Said:

	It definitely has potential. I applaud your use of grammar and punctuation, it's definitely the best that I've seen thus far on this site. Spelling, too! Bonus points! Your poem in itself is too vague and doesn't have enough substance to really be a poem. There needs to be more details, more of an idea of who you're talking to, what you're talking about. Stanzas, length, don't be afraid to express yourself.

On January 4th 2008 OPreflector Said:

	I think it is mysterious yet precise

On December 31st 2007 lisaljb Said:

	Wow, this great, love the style of this poem, well done!

On December 22nd 2007 Amers123456 Said:

	I like it it's very good!!

On December 19th 2007 vernathome Said:

	very good

On December 18th 2007 Snooky9e Said:

	i like it...very good...

On December 3rd 2007 Thugnastay227 Said:

	i like ur style.