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That Night....
My name is not important, but my face you won't forget.
I'll haunt you in your deepest sleep,
You'll wake up, dripping sweat.
And in the darkness of your room, the shadows I will creep.
You see me in the hallways, you cannot get away.
On the face of everyone you meet,
My image will not stray.
My cheap cologne, you said you loved, now don't smell so sweet.
Memories of that dreaded night, It started out so good,
Your high school crush just asked you out,
Of course, you said you would.
Tonight's the night that you would know, exactly what I 'm about.
I picked you up at eight oclock, for dinner and a show,
You wore your bright red dress,
your eyes were all aglow.
We sat up at the bluff, I felt your warm caress.
But when I wanted more and more, you quickly changed your mind.
It made me lose my self control,
I took what wasn't mine.
And left you with my memory, embroidered to your soul.
| On July 26th 2009 servantofall36 Said: |
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| This is really something, friend. It is chillingly well written. |
| On May 22nd 2009 LaurenLozX Said: |
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| Made me shiver, really good though |
| On March 25th 2009 Pumpkinpeeches Said: |
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| That scared me a bit. But it was nicely written. |
| On March 17th 2009 BuNnYoo7 Said: |
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| talk about stalker? haha... |
| On January 25th 2009 mikeGie Said: |
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| creepy ass shit but good though well done |
| On December 26th 2008 BeagleGurl9 Said: |
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| pretty good |
| On November 30th 2008 ViableFate Said: |
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| Very scary, I think that's what you were going for. |
| On November 2nd 2008 afunkysippycup Said: |
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| wow. this is like, really good. "i took what wasn't mine" O.O awesome poem!!! |
| On September 7th 2008 ddiana3 Said: |
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| OMg your really good. =) I like this one alot. :) |
| On June 5th 2008 muse4apoem Said: |
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| This is awsome I love it!!! ~Kudos~ |
| On April 17th 2008 jwoody1980 Said: |
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| very good |
| On April 4th 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said: |
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| love it very good written. i love it. =] |
| On March 13th 2008 Kep89 Said: |
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| koool job. |
| On March 5th 2008 tumblegrl1994 Said: |
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| Amazing! Great work! Keep it up! |
| On February 26th 2008 beautyisthewol Said: |
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| Good job! |
| On February 26th 2008 EvilRaven9892 Said: |
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| *speechless* |
| On February 25th 2008 kagome13WBMS Said: |
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| WOWo_Obut in a good way |
| On February 25th 2008 assumetheworst Said: |
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| this is great! nice job :) |
| On February 25th 2008 mcihellejane Said: |
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| You did a great job w/ this one. A certain suspense lead up to the ending. It was a little chilling, but I love the view from the other side. |
| On February 25th 2008 Thugnastay227 Said: |
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| i saw the end comming from the first few lines but that that doesnt take a thing away from the poem....chilling indeed. well written. bravo. |
| On February 25th 2008 pjjustin Said: |
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| wickedly tasteful and simply good! |
| On February 25th 2008 Pikkakard Said: |
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| Definitely chilling... |
| On February 25th 2008 RalRasper Said: |
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| Are you sure you never tried that????? ....j/k |
| On February 24th 2008 gonzo4201 Said: |
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| Lol, Total work of fiction, I am not a rapist, just to clear that up for everyone |
| On February 24th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said: |
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| Really good writing~ Sort-of scary at the end. I like it. It's honest~ and creative. "snaps" |


