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Created: 02/24 2008
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Category: Pain

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That Night....

My name is not important, but my face you won't forget.

I'll haunt you in your deepest sleep,

You'll wake up, dripping sweat.

And in the darkness of your room,  the shadows I will creep.

 

You see me in the hallways, you cannot get away.

On the face of everyone you meet,

My image will not stray.

My cheap cologne, you said you loved, now don't smell so sweet.

 

Memories of that dreaded night, It started out so good,

Your high school crush just asked you out,

Of course, you said you would.

Tonight's the night that you would know, exactly what I 'm  about.

 

I picked you up at eight oclock, for dinner and a show,

You wore your bright red dress,

your eyes were all aglow.

We sat up at the bluff, I felt your warm caress.

 

But when I wanted more and more, you quickly changed your mind.

It made me lose my self control,

I took what wasn't mine.

And left you with my memory, embroidered to your soul.

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On July 26th 2009 servantofall36 Said: 
servantofall36 This is really something, friend. It is chillingly well written.
On May 22nd 2009 LaurenLozX Said: 
LaurenLozX Made me shiver, really good though
On March 25th 2009 Pumpkinpeeches Said: 
Pumpkinpeeches That scared me a bit. But it was nicely written.
On March 17th 2009 BuNnYoo7 Said: 
BuNnYoo7 talk about stalker? haha...
On January 25th 2009 mikeGie Said: 
mikeGie creepy ass shit but good though well done
On December 26th 2008 BeagleGurl9 Said: 
BeagleGurl9 pretty good
On November 30th 2008 ViableFate Said: 
ViableFate Very scary, I think that's what you were going for.
On November 2nd 2008 afunkysippycup Said: 
afunkysippycup wow. this is like, really good. "i took what wasn't mine" O.O awesome poem!!!
On September 7th 2008 ddiana3 Said: 
ddiana3 OMg your really good. =) I like this one alot. :)
On June 5th 2008 muse4apoem Said: 
muse4apoem This is awsome I love it!!! ~Kudos~
On April 17th 2008 jwoody1980 Said: 
jwoody1980 very good
On April 4th 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said: 
xXPunkGirl09Xx love it very good written. i love it. =]
On March 13th 2008 Kep89 Said: 
Kep89 koool job.
On March 5th 2008 tumblegrl1994 Said: 
tumblegrl1994 Amazing! Great work! Keep it up!
On February 26th 2008 beautyisthewol Said: 
beautyisthewol Good job!
On February 26th 2008 EvilRaven9892 Said: 
EvilRaven9892 *speechless*
On February 25th 2008 kagome13WBMS Said: 
kagome13WBMS WOWo_Obut in a good way
On February 25th 2008 assumetheworst Said: 
assumetheworst this is great! nice job :)
On February 25th 2008 mcihellejane Said: 
mcihellejane You did a great job w/ this one. A certain suspense lead up to the ending. It was a little chilling, but I love the view from the other side.
On February 25th 2008 Thugnastay227 Said: 
Thugnastay227 i saw the end comming from the first few lines but that that doesnt take a thing away from the poem....chilling indeed. well written. bravo.
On February 25th 2008 pjjustin Said: 
pjjustin wickedly tasteful and simply good!
On February 25th 2008 Pikkakard Said: 
Pikkakard Definitely chilling...
On February 25th 2008 RalRasper Said: 
RalRasper Are you sure you never tried that????? ....j/k
On February 24th 2008 gonzo4201 Said: 
gonzo4201 Lol, Total work of fiction, I am not a rapist, just to clear that up for everyone
On February 24th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said: 
sixtiesdoll Really good writing~ Sort-of scary at the end. I like it. It's honest~ and creative. "snaps"