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Created: 08/31 2008
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Category: Love

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The Mistress

Everyone stared,

as you walked through the door.

Who is this stranger?

The chorus of whispers,

seemed to implore.

 

In the back of the room,

With her friends by her side,

But still alone, sat the wife.

Her eyes, ringed in red,

From all the tears she had cried.

 

You had seen her before,

But you never had talked.

Just like a dead man,

Making his way down the green mile,

So nervous at first, so slowly you walked.

 

Rows upon rows,

Of his kith and his kin.

They knew not your name,

But they knew who you were.

The temptress who'd cast their son into sin.

 

Like bullets through skin,

You could feel their cold stares.

Just one last goodbye,

Is that too much to ask,

you wonder as you walk up the altar stairs.

 

You kiss his cheek,

And in his hands place a rose.

You whisper I Love You,

As you silently weep,

Your tears falling gently, upon his nose.

 

As you stand with your love,

His wife walks to your side,

"It's not easy, but I forgive you,

Because I loved him too,"

She gives you a hug, and together you cry.

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On December 3rd 2008 speederspider Said: 
speederspider wow that wife is nice. I think that most wives would have killed the woman.
On November 30th 2008 max5892 Said: 
max5892 aww wow. this is great. and i agree with the comment below me. this is not likely to happen in reality (more likely will be a catfight) but i wish things happened like this. its great. kudos.
On October 17th 2008 seekerovtruth Said: 
seekerovtruth Now there's a scenario that you probably won't see play out in reality too often. The wife AND the mistress crying together because THEY loved him. I secretly suspect one of them may have been his demise. lol At any rate, this was superbly written, and I love the concept of forgiveness of even the hardest trespasses that we could ever forgive actually happening and this did a great job of portraying exactly that, and I applaud you for it. June
On October 14th 2008 Lovelyeyes0 Said: 
Lovelyeyes0 hm... hatred, love, pain and forgiveness... all in one big poem tortilla. Mmhmmm. I like it.
On September 17th 2008 lyrikaldisastr Said: 
lyrikaldisastr i liked this..nice flow, nice concept...good descriptions
On September 8th 2008 LBbaby2010 Said: 
LBbaby2010 very gd poem,i like it
On September 4th 2008 ausjo Said: 
ausjo Very clever. Haha. Won't say what I am thinking though. *zips mouth*
On September 4th 2008 CassieZ Said: 
CassieZ wow that was beautifully done :) nice job. wasnt expecting that ending.
On September 3rd 2008 sixtiespixie Said: 
sixtiespixie Wow gonz. Where did this spring from? I really love this one :)
On September 3rd 2008 Dragonbourne Said: 
Dragonbourne wow i was not exspecting that ending that was deep and nice i loved it very nice gonzo
On September 2nd 2008 mypoeticrage Said: 
mypoeticrage very good, like the way it unfolds
On September 2nd 2008 xHickChick789x Said: 
xHickChick789x btw I am subscribed
On September 2nd 2008 xHickChick789x Said: 
xHickChick789x aww... this is emotional... very sad, but it was wonderful.
On September 1st 2008 mydragonlord Said: 
mydragonlord Beautiful!!
On August 31st 2008 muse4apoem Said: 
muse4apoem Beautiful. :)
On August 31st 2008 morbidangel585 Said: 
morbidangel585 awwww its sad. but its nice to see she didnt wanna go and beat her up. i woulda beat her up. lol. but this was great =]