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The Mistress
Everyone stared,
as you walked through the door.
Who is this stranger?
The chorus of whispers,
seemed to implore.
In the back of the room,
With her friends by her side,
But still alone, sat the wife.
Her eyes, ringed in red,
From all the tears she had cried.
You had seen her before,
But you never had talked.
Just like a dead man,
Making his way down the green mile,
So nervous at first, so slowly you walked.
Rows upon rows,
Of his kith and his kin.
They knew not your name,
But they knew who you were.
The temptress who'd cast their son into sin.
Like bullets through skin,
You could feel their cold stares.
Just one last goodbye,
Is that too much to ask,
you wonder as you walk up the altar stairs.
You kiss his cheek,
And in his hands place a rose.
You whisper I Love You,
As you silently weep,
Your tears falling gently, upon his nose.
As you stand with your love,
His wife walks to your side,
"It's not easy, but I forgive you,
Because I loved him too,"
She gives you a hug, and together you cry.
| On December 3rd 2008 speederspider Said: |
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| wow that wife is nice. I think that most wives would have killed the woman. |
| On November 30th 2008 max5892 Said: |
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| aww wow. this is great. and i agree with the comment below me. this is not likely to happen in reality (more likely will be a catfight) but i wish things happened like this. its great. kudos. |
| On October 17th 2008 seekerovtruth Said: |
| On October 14th 2008 Lovelyeyes0 Said: |
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| hm... hatred, love, pain and forgiveness... all in one big poem tortilla. Mmhmmm. I like it. |
| On September 17th 2008 lyrikaldisastr Said: |
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| i liked this..nice flow, nice concept...good descriptions |
| On September 8th 2008 LBbaby2010 Said: |
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| very gd poem,i like it |
| On September 4th 2008 ausjo Said: |
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| Very clever. Haha. Won't say what I am thinking though. *zips mouth* |
| On September 4th 2008 CassieZ Said: |
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| wow that was beautifully done :) nice job. wasnt expecting that ending. |
| On September 3rd 2008 sixtiespixie Said: |
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| Wow gonz. Where did this spring from? I really love this one :) |
| On September 3rd 2008 Dragonbourne Said: |
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| wow i was not exspecting that ending that was deep and nice i loved it very nice gonzo |
| On September 2nd 2008 mypoeticrage Said: |
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| very good, like the way it unfolds |
| On September 2nd 2008 xHickChick789x Said: |
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| btw I am subscribed |
| On September 2nd 2008 xHickChick789x Said: |
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| aww... this is emotional... very sad, but it was wonderful. |
| On September 1st 2008 mydragonlord Said: |
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| Beautiful!! |
| On August 31st 2008 muse4apoem Said: |
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| Beautiful. :) |
| On August 31st 2008 morbidangel585 Said: |
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| awwww its sad. but its nice to see she didnt wanna go and beat her up. i woulda beat her up. lol. but this was great =] |


