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Created: 09/19 2008
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Category: Fear

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Planet Gonzo

You ignored all of my warnings,

Although careful at first,

You delve deeper into my mind,

Please beware of my curse. 

As you walk into the valley,

Through the shadows and the death,

The air, it reeks of sulphur,

The sky is stained blood red. 

The cries of the Wicked,

Their screams, are all in vain,

Still alone, they are enough,

To drive a man insane.

This barren Wasteland,

Though it is not so kind,

Must exist to protect me,

From the Creature inside my mind.

Off into the distance,

Though it is only a blur.

The Oasis awaits you,

With water and air so pure.

You can't stay here forever,

Though you wish you could.

The water, it is drying up,

we have eaten all the food.

You wish for us to carry on,

along our merry way,

Though you failed to realize.

There is no good this way.

I beg that we could turn around,

For I know not what comes next.

I dare not venture out this far,

Into the Creature's nest.

It is here,  that we must part,

Fare thee well, my good friend.

I wonder as I walk away

If I'll see you alive again.

 

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On June 15th 2009 sixtiespixie Said: 
sixtiespixie You're still one of my fave poets. I lik planet gonzo
On November 4th 2008 Benitto420 Said: 
Benitto420 Cool, the curse of your mind is invading my will!
On October 31st 2008 Thugnastay227 Said: 
Thugnastay227 very interesting. sounds like a planet for me
On October 3rd 2008 LeahLive Said: 
LeahLive *puts magnifying glass down* Sooo awesome. I must come have tea in this planet some time!
On September 30th 2008 seekerovtruth Said: 
seekerovtruth I walked the path into your mind, curious as to what I might find, and as I emerged on the other side, and found gratitude in the fact I made it out alive. hahaha :)
On September 20th 2008 muse4apoem Said: 
muse4apoem Yes the font is hard to see. :) Sounds like a bad nightmare! This poem rocks! :)
On September 19th 2008 lyrikaldisastr Said: 
lyrikaldisastr if the other one is part one..this ones waay better..yea the font and size of the font makes it kinda hard to read but other than that this is good
On September 19th 2008 ausjo Said: 
ausjo Cool poem, but that tiny font killed my eyes. lol. Getting old you seeeee.
On September 19th 2008 ddiana3 Said: 
ddiana3 this is really great. kmp on any new ones? haha. oh wait....im suscribed... 0.o i forgotsss.... XDD