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Created: 11/06 2008
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Category: Fear

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Overcome

Hand over hand,

You slowly ascend,

Afraid of the impact,

You would have in the end.

 

Many times had you dreamt,

Of this very day.

The day that your fears,

Would all go away.

 

You have summoned the courage,

To climb to the top.

But more courage is needed,

For the hundred foot drop.

 

You remember so clearly,

The snickers and sneers,

The way they would tease you,

For showing your fears.

 

But today will be different,

You will prove them all wrong,

And show them how truly,

You want to belong.

 

As you stand there triumphant,

Perched up on your ledge,

you make the mistake,

of looking down over the edge.

 

The people below,

Looked at you in awe.

They watched on in horror,

Couldn't believe what they saw.

 

From up on the scaffold,

Way up in the sky,

The dizziness got you,

You fell from ahigh.

 

At first, just a gasp,

But then to a scream,

Then suddenly you realized,

This isn't a dream.

 

You really had done it,

It wasn't that bad,

You thought to yourself,

Then suddenly...Splash!

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On November 16th 2008 Thugnastay227 Said: 
Thugnastay227 very cool like jo jo said lol. splash lolol. too funny. oh and i never assume. lol excellent read gonz
On November 9th 2008 ausjo Said: 
ausjo Cooooool poem. I liked it a lot. Got swept up in that feeling. Remember a few times in my childhood confronting high dives. Scary business.
On November 8th 2008 gonzo4201 Said: 
gonzo4201 I love how everyone just assumes that this is about suicide, when in fact it is about jumping off a highdive for the first time... jeesh, ya'll don't know me at all...
On November 8th 2008 speederspider Said: 
speederspider wow I thought it was a metaphor, then all of a sudden it's like someone is committing suicide. awesome write:)
On November 7th 2008 Kdanae88 Said: 
Kdanae88 THIS IS TOTALLY NOT SAD AT ALL!!! HOW FUN!!!!!
On November 6th 2008 morbidangel585 Said: 
morbidangel585 wow i loved this
On November 6th 2008 Kdanae88 Said: 
Kdanae88 Wow!! This is good.. but sad. Real sad. But real good!