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or "Til Death Do Us Part" part 2

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Created: 11/13 2008
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Category: Lyric

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She Cried

She looks out the window,

Tears wellin in her eyes.

She remembers the good times,

But now how many times he's made her cry.

 

If he could only imagine,

How much she hurts, deep down inside,

Then maybe he'd remember,

Of how his love once burned so bright.

 

Been six long years since their wedding night,

But it's been at least two,

Since he last held her tight,

And she cries...

 

...Herself to sleep,

In the pale moonlight she gently weeps,

"I want to die",

So she tries...

 

...Thinking of something else,

She knows he'll be back,

It's all become so routine.

The phone rings...

 

"We need you to come down,

Identify this body.

He was going ninety,

When he ran into that tree."

 

She could only imagine,

as she hung up the phone.

She was now truly lonely,

Though so many nights she spent alone,

 

And she cried...

 

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On December 29th 2008 fresh20wo09man Said: 
fresh20wo09man REALLY GOOD!!
On December 28th 2008 godsbluejay Said: 
godsbluejay i love this poem sir...
On November 16th 2008 Thugnastay227 Said: 
Thugnastay227 I have nothing more creative to say other than wow. and it's a good wow too.
On November 15th 2008 ausjo Said: 
ausjo Very emotive. Good job.
On November 15th 2008 muse4apoem Said: 
muse4apoem She shouldn't be too sad she wanted to end her life. Now she can just start new. This is a wonderful poem really you written this very well.
On November 14th 2008 speederspider Said: 
speederspider oh my that's powerful and I love it.
On November 13th 2008 morbidangel585 Said: 
morbidangel585 awww. the beginning deff. hit a spot n made me cry. i know that all to well. very sad ending though. well sad all together. but very good
On November 13th 2008 CassieZ Said: 
CassieZ wow, this is amazing.
On November 13th 2008 BatSpider Said: 
BatSpider That is so depressing, it made my great mood go to a low. Which I guess just proves its a good heartfelt poem.