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Along the Wooded Path
As I walk along this wooded path,
The leaves fall from the trees.
They gently float down to the ground,
Some blowing in the breeze.
I stand there for awhile,
I dare not make a sound.
The songbirds play the soundtrack,
Pure beauty all around.
I sit a moment to take it in,
Then continue on my way.
Tis still a long way to my home,
And the sky is turning grey.
The trees take on an eerie shape,
Their bare branches in the dark.
Silhouetted by the strike of lightning,
As it flashed across the bark.
Out of the forest, I finally escaped,
To a house I had never seen.
Inside was a man I could see through the window,
He appeared to be bitter and mean.
I decided to risk it because I needed shelter,
So I went up and knocked on the door.
But with all my rap-a-tap-taps,
I got no answer back, only a single word, "Lenore?"
As I attempt to comprehend what's going on,
I awaken from my dream.
I'm sitting on the wooded path,
As I listen to the songbirds sing.
| On September 16th 2009 gonzo4201 Said: |
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| It's a tribute to two of my favorite poets... Kan ya guess who they are...hehehe... |
| On September 8th 2009 lyrikaldisastr Said: |
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| liked the flow..sounds good as u read it u kno?...kinda feel like the poem should have a part 2 tho...like w'sup with the response "lenore?"..but overall good flow is better than most |
| On April 11th 2009 skr3m0status Said: |
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| That is great.
:) |
| On February 5th 2009 tnke95 Said: |
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| amazing! |
| On January 22nd 2009 morbidangel585 Said: |
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| aw beautifully done. loved every bit of it |
| On January 17th 2009 ArtemisStar Said: |
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| Ooooo that's a good one. Felt like it could have continued into an epic poem/story. Liked it very much sir |
| On January 13th 2009 muse4apoem Said: |
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| It's very pretty. :) |
| On January 12th 2009 ialwayswrite Said: |
| On January 12th 2009 max5892 Said: |
| On January 12th 2009 dreamrocker333 Said: |
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| very cool, and different!!!! I love this one. |
| On January 12th 2009 servantofall36 Said: |
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| Very lovely. Whimsical, even. |
| On January 12th 2009 transgenic Said: |
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| Great imagery. |
| On January 12th 2009 lisaljb Said: |
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| I love it! |
| On January 12th 2009 speederspider Said: |
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| ahhh you dreamed that? Wow I almost felt as tho I was there as I read it. Probably cause I live in a place like that so it's easy to imagine, but I loved this! |
| On January 12th 2009 Benitto420 Said: |
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| Very well written my friend! I like how it just flows like a gentle, babbling brook :D |
| On January 12th 2009 DashboardLogic Said: |
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| This is... odd but amazing. I agree with BatSpider though. More detail. But it was fantastic. |
| On January 12th 2009 BatSpider Said: |
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| it would have been great if the dream went into more detail...but I guess this way it leaves you wondering what could have happened, and the flow is beautiful! |
| On January 12th 2009 elvira2196 Said: |
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| Very nice. |


