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Created: 05/18 2007
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Category: Pain

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My Fuckin Suicide

I hate the fucking drama people make.
Everyone is so fuckin fake.
Remember how things use to be?
When it was just fuckin you and me?
My only friend is this fuckin Knife.
He was my FUCKIN life.

I took many fuckin multi-colored pills.
Just ended up with fuckin hospital bills.
i wish this fuckin world was fairer.
im thinkin my own fuckin birth was an error.

I tied up my own fuckin noose.
Tried to fuckin hang myself.
But i made the fuckin rope to loose.

now its just fuckin me and this fuckin blade.
Me fuckin world is about to fade.
That didnt fuckin kill me eiether.

Walked down the highway at fuckin night.
hopin to fuckin get hit.
didnt work, the fuckin popo put up a fight.
god, i cant even fuckin kill myself right.

In tha fuckin ghetto, hoping to get fuckin shot.
I just got made fun of a fuckin lot.

I fuckin failed at my own suicide.
Now i can only fuckin run and hide.
this life, i cannot bare.
When i come out of hiding,
i hope for the world to be fair.
I dont wanna try to repeat.
of my own defeat.

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On September 24th 2007 deathraiser Said: 
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nice.
On September 15th 2007 spanky081 Said: 
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"Im thinkin my own fuckin birth was an error" Im thinkin this fuckin poem was an error. Seriously, maybe you should try putting down the AFI CD and reading a fuckin paper some fuckin time. There are teenagers dying in Darfur and I have to listen to your suburban bitching about wandering down highways in the middle of the night trying to get hit. Theres already people who do that. They're called "homeless people looking for car insurance money when your dad hits them on the way home from the office" Your poetry is, so far, ASS. I am going to go read one of your "He doesnt like me poems and try to cut my wrists, WITH A FUCKIN MACHETE, thats how Darfur kids commit suicide.
On May 20th 2007 zomgitzwendyxD Said: 
zomgitzwendyxD i love it [;!
On May 20th 2007 jenxbells Said: 
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i agree with ediboyo89 it needs to be toned down.. and not done so forcefully. it is sorta humorous.
On May 20th 2007 CUMCAkEz Said: 
CUMCAkEz i L0VE iT! it`s really intense&&emotional.. i know what you`re going through.. hate the drama
On May 20th 2007 ediboyo89 Said: 
ediboyo89 to much of an f-ing tone. good emotion, but i think it could have done without so much of the eh.. yeah. so it's not so much just an 'angry' bunch of words. and the rhyming feels a bit forced... i would suggest rewriting it in open.. forcing rhyme can sometimes rob a poem of it's emotion. like: rhyming pills and bills... it shifts the tone of the poem, making it more humorous... :) anyway, that's just me.
On May 20th 2007 bratjolly2006 Said: 
bratjolly2006 ive totally been there...wow..that was good.
On May 20th 2007 dolphinXXlover Said: 
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one word... awesome.
On May 20th 2007 pengz666 Said: 
pengz666 I fucking love it. So meaningful and just awesome.
On May 20th 2007 tswieberg Said: 
tswieberg This is a really good poem......sad
On May 18th 2007 ismile4u27 Said: 
ismile4u27 this a ral fucking good poem... haha..yea it was awesome...seriously
On May 18th 2007 chickenbroth Said: 
chickenbroth wow this is really kickass! I love the way that you write.
On May 18th 2007 lissette77 Said: 
lissette77 thats was cool i liked it.
On May 18th 2007 Pushpop09 Said: 
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Wow..I really love it. Sounds like how I used to feel. I have alot of rage built up inside. The only reason I'm not ike this anymore is because of my boyfriend. I hope you read some of my poetry and tell me what you think. Maybe you can relate to thema s well I related to yours. Much Love
On May 18th 2007 xxxAngelicaxxx Said: 
xxxAngelicaxxx wow this is deep.you should read some of mine