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Created:
07/23 2008
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180
Category:
Passion
My Poems
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Whenever... |
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alone |
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OLD NEWS |
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Why? |
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Nana =[ |
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I See You |
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MAYBE |
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These Feelings |
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my mistake ='[ |
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Once Again... |
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The End =] |
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Behind |
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New Friend =] |
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Life |
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Late Night Thoughts... |
Underneath the Stars
Underneath the stars is where i go at night.
It is my secret escape.
I place i call my own.
When everyone is sleeping i sneak out and lay
I lay on the dewy, damp grass and look up at the shining objects in the sky.
They amaze me and make me think.
I think how small i really am in this big scary world,
and what i must do and risk to make a difference in it.
It's truly a magical site.
Somewhere i love to be.
I close my eyes and dream
Of what i will become, of what i will be.
It is how i get away from everything, where i become mesmerized.
But one day,
when i am something,
when i am someone,
i will always remeber,
my special place,
underneath the stars <3
| On September 8th 2008 vance4 Said: |
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| i'm pushing 27 and i still let the stars calm my busy mind! It is truly amazing... |
| On August 4th 2008 edwardlover92 Said: |
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| lovely, truely |
| On July 27th 2008 Thugnastay227 Said: |
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| u may not see it yet. but u are someone. u are something. ur are a mexican woman and ur proud of ur heritage. |
| On July 27th 2008 ALIESAM21 Said: |
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| awww sweet! |
| On July 25th 2008 ManicPixie27 Said: |
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| Thats really good. |
| On July 25th 2008 charon17 Said: |
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| That was so beautiful, your so talented. |
| On July 24th 2008 MeXiMaMi725 Said: |
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| la poema aqui es muy bueno!
continuar el buen trabajo! te admiro chica!
*~V~* |
| On July 24th 2008 mariahh4 Said: |
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| this is awesome |
| On July 24th 2008 mydragonlord Said: |
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| i like this one!! |
| On July 24th 2008 Crosspiano Said: |
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| uuummmm?????........... |
| On July 23rd 2008 Natalyi Said: |
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| I l0ved this because u can image thAT U ARE RIGHT THERE LAYING IN THE GRASS AND THINKING ABOUT ALL THE THINGS U WANT TO BECOME lOVELY. lol |
| On July 23rd 2008 Angel2k11 Said: |
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| AAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! this is really really AWESOME! you put alot of thought into your poems, and it shows in this one....Great job bff!! |
| On July 23rd 2008 jabip15 Said: |
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| omg i love this! it's so beautiful!! *tear* :) |


