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Created:
08/23 2008
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139
Category:
Love
My Poems
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jelousy's punishment |
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revenge of a child |
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true friendship |
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dreams |
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they let me down |
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who am I |
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rain |
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the boy |
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But not like mine. |
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HELL |
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father |
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warning |
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Jeremiah |
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Taken |
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end me |
father
can you remember your father,
is he with you now,
does he hold you,
and love you,
and keep you safe?
does he do more than call you?
does he do more than write?
he he in the next room,
when your frightend in the night?
do you miss him?
is he always there?
do you know by his eyes,
that he does care?
does he scold you,
cause he loves you?
does he scold you at all?
does he keep you safe?
when your small?
i wish my daddy,
didnt screw up,
wish he wasnt in a place,
he cant escape,
but he is.
i learned to live with it,
i did,
so now i aint no kid,
but..... i wish he was here,
to whipe away this fear.
| On January 20th 2009 vernathome Said: |
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| Very nice indeed it was moving, emotional and poignant, However once again your spelling or lack of proofreading prevent me from giving it higher than (8) sorry Keep writing. |
| On January 3rd 2009 erickagere Said: |
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| Aww...is he in prison? I can't believe you don't have way more votes on your poetry because you truly are a great poet. |


