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first of many, in a seris of poems

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Created: 09/20 2008
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Category: Anger

My Poems

+ 4
jelousy's punishment
+ 3
revenge of a child
+ 2
true friendship
+ 2
dreams
+ 1
they let me down
+ 3
who am I
+ 2
rain
+ 1
the boy
+ 2
But not like mine.
+ 4
HELL
+ 3
father
+ 2
warning
+ 5
Jeremiah
+ 2
Taken
+ 3
end me

Taken

my name.....

is a name not spoken,

for all who once cared,

were taken.

my own identity,

shaken.

they said they'd do there best,

to solve this awful crime,

but no evidence they could find,

in my moms pool of slime.

if i had seen it,

that'd be evidence enough,

they would've belived me,

they'd comfort me, instead of shruggin,

"tough"

but i showed them,

i showed they didn't care,

showed they didn't mind,

me dwelling in despair,

i ran.

and no one chased,

thought someone whould,

reckonize my face,

but nobody did,

just like that,

i wasn't a kid,

i was invisble.

my name.....

is a name not spoken,

its just a meaningless token,

for those who know people who care,

but for me,

they arn't anywhere.

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On October 6th 2008 isrraelverde07 Said: 
isrraelverde07 u write very good