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people told me it was good....

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Created: 04/14 2007
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Category: Love

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When you come into my life I felt on though you opened a door in my heart

Feelings I had never experienced before started to inch their way inside of me.

I slowly started feeling the love I felt for you grow stronger.

Now that I have had you in my life i realize that my life will never be the same if you leave.

Never Complete.

 

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On April 17th 2007 Trippaholic Said: 
Trippaholic very well done...i like it
On April 16th 2007 joshattack Said: 
joshattack That's awesome man. And... drumroll please... it's time for my mantra. I tell this to anyone who I think can write at least one thing well. This is good, but everything has room for improvement if you're willing to make it. It's all in editing, and I think you could make this even better!
On April 16th 2007 joshattack Said: 
joshattack That's awesome man. And... drumroll please... it's time for my mantra. I tell this to anyone who I think can write at least one thing well. This is good, but everything has room for improvement if you're willing to make it. It's all in editing, and I think you could make this even better!
On April 16th 2007 joshattack Said: 
joshattack That's awesome man. And... drumroll please... it's time for my mantra. I tell this to anyone who I think can write at least one thing well. This is good, but everything has room for improvement if you're willing to make it. It's all in editing, and I think you could make this even better!
On April 14th 2007 pnipearl Said: 
pnipearl this is so beautiful.
On April 14th 2007 mtooootsie215 Said: 
mtooootsie215 aww love it
On April 14th 2007 rachelspeig Said: 
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nice poem, i really like it.
On April 14th 2007 thecolorblack Said: 
thecolorblack I guess you are incomplete now huh?
On April 14th 2007 Chelle57 Said: 
Chelle57 Well you already know what I have to say about this! ^_^
On April 14th 2007 thecolorblack Said: 
thecolorblack :)
On April 14th 2007 ausjo Said: 
ausjo That's cute.
On April 14th 2007 tswieberg Said: 
tswieberg The half that makes us whole....nice
On April 14th 2007 drowningnlove Said: 
drowningnlove awww, let me guess, it's about jacob? Nicely written.
On April 14th 2007 chrissey08h2 Said: 
chrissey08h2 sweet poem