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its about my ex, a couple months ago...Rate this Poem
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The Broken Friendship |
A cheating heart
A year had passed, he thought he was over her.
She broke his heart, he knew it'd be hard to get over her but he tried.
He was happy now, she was in his past, he had a beautiful girlfriend now.
She calls him, and tells him she wants him back.
He refuses and responds with "i have a girlfriend now."
She calls back everyday to tell him the same thing only to recieve the same reply.
He wouldn't give in but he knew that deep down he wanted so badly to be with her.
After two weeks of this she asks him if he loved her, only to hear, "I'll love you forever."
She doesnt give up and he doesn't give in, still trying to avoid being hurt again.
He loved his new girls but in the he knew a piece of him will always be with his first love.
He knew he would always be a cheater at heart.
I dont know if its any good, but its like a story of me and my ex, donmt be to harsh if u dont like it? suggestions would be helpful though? im kinda new at poetry still.....
Please Login to post comments| On December 1st 2008 babyblue187954 Said: |
| its great.
I had a cheating heart once
But I gave in to the Ex.
& Im happy I did. |
| On June 19th 2008 maryfriendly21 Said: |
| yeah its good.. i wrote a bunch but dont show'em.. |
| On May 31st 2008 XOXbAbybOO Said: |
| exctly my words lol me and my ex to my ex has a girl but he wants to come back but he feels trapped lol |
| On May 8th 2008 smile4evr Said: |
| its really good! |
| On April 7th 2008 1firerose Said: |
| its a really good poem you may be new to petry but its a great poem |
| On January 2nd 2008 genoachick01 Said: |
| good. like it. :D |
| On September 19th 2007 lostnlove2121 Said: |
| i love this poem ur pretty good if u ask me. |
| On September 18th 2007 igotacheeto Said: |
| i know exactly how u feel and yes it is good i LOVE it |
| On August 6th 2007 alexmorales56 Said: |
| i like it and i know what u mean |
| On August 1st 2007 atlandrea Said: |
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| that was real good. better than i could do. keep it up. Its all the truth |
| On July 2nd 2007 nativebabe10 Said: |
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| i really like it, it kinda reminds me of me and by first love, but as we all know we got to move on sometime. there are many new people out there and someday that person will come along. good Poem. |
| On June 26th 2007 SH3Z21 Said: |
| Its good, but more likea dairy kind of thing, keep it up brah |
| On June 21st 2007 jazmin591 Said: |
| you did this poem on my birthday. :D |
| On May 23rd 2007 13579Vee Said: |
| not bad at all |
| On May 17th 2007 kassidy21 Said: |
| I like it...reminds me of me...execpt i gave in to that person who called me and told me he loved me and now we have been together for three years+ |
| On May 1st 2007 iluvtostito Said: |
| i like this. soooo know how you feel |
| On April 24th 2007 kathiloca Said: |
| I really liked this one...hit kinda close to home..=) |
| On April 22nd 2007 gunz6969 Said: |
| nice |
| On April 20th 2007 babyblue187954 Said: |
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| So been there.. But In my sit.. The guy I was with was my first love but thenI fell for another guy and we dated for 1yr or more.. then broke up got back with my first love and then he wantedme back andI still loved and still do but I didnt want to go through the getting over thing again..lol |
| On April 18th 2007 xxcassiejayxx Said: |
| it's not bad :) |
| On April 18th 2007 runner45 Said: |
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| are yall serious?
sorry but i have taken poetry courses
and am graduating with a MINOR in english
and anything like this would have to be re-written
poetry is more than prose
poetry is symbolism
poetry has rhythm(which this seemed to have some of)
poetry has imagery
*picture a scene and describe it in a way no one else has, it can be story like if he is looking to the past, reminiscing |
| On April 17th 2007 sirreal Said: |
| it was arite. |
| On April 17th 2007 blondesexebabe Said: |
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| absolutely amazing.. it was well written! Wonderful Job! |
| On April 17th 2007 qweenbitch Said: |
| wow that was a great poem i swear it was smazing if i was you id conseder being a poet and selling some of your work it would be a great way to make money and expecially since your great at it!!! |
| On April 17th 2007 serg115 Said: |
| Hey man i lov eits awsoem it is what i am experiencing right now and i have no idea what do do but keep wrighting |
