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i dunno if i like this, its kinda stupid

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Created: 04/21 2007
Views: 1015
Category: Love

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The Broken Friendship

Forever=the promise ill keep

I'll never be able to tell you in words how much you hurt me.

I thought we were good together, don't you agree?

It started off as a crush, and ends with me hating you so much.

But deep down I know I still love you, and this you knew.

Forever is the promise I'll keep

So if you die today, yes I'd cry, I won't lie, but I hope that if you do die, you go knowing you lost quite a guy.

 

I dont like it to much, but eh wutever, It rhymes though :)

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On September 30th 2007 jessielee8762 Said: 
jessielee8762 i like this one it really great
On May 10th 2007 gigglehottie Said: 
gigglehottie well done, nice wording
On April 30th 2007 Lookin4TruLuv Said: 
Lookin4TruLuv LoL
On April 24th 2007 kathiloca Said: 
kathiloca I really liked this..kinda reminds me of an ex...lol
On April 21st 2007 tswieberg Said: 
tswieberg Nice poem
On April 21st 2007 wannabetimthe1 Said: 
wannabetimthe1 this is great chris:)
On April 21st 2007 Johnnysomeone Said: 
Johnnysomeone i like this one man
On April 21st 2007 xxcassiejayxx Said: 
xxcassiejayxx i like this a lot... i think it's your best one :)
On April 21st 2007 Trippaholic Said: 
Trippaholic i like this...well done