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feelings suck :PRate this Poem
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Created:
08/08 2009
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97
Category:
Pain
My Poems
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8
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Vines of Wrath |
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12
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Too Late |
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4
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Creature From the Hole |
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9
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Watching Everything Pass You by |
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6
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He Doesn't See |
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10
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Be Free |
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8
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Leave Me Alone |
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6
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That I'll Come Back |
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21
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Too Young to Die |
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11
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Say you Love Me |
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5
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Fun I'm Having As I Go Insane! |
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12
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The Mario and Luigi Dance Time |
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8
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My Heart Unfolds |
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6
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Because I Knew You |
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Flying Into Darkness |
Hide My Pain
Close my eyes
take it away
this pain inside
I don’t like hurting
or dealing with this
with the rain I sigh
clouding my feelings
keeping them hidden
deep inside
oh...
this feeling inside
is not worth the pain
wondering if I'll ever
feel alive again
for a moment
I come alive
heart beating freely
then I die
again
- Jills '09 (c)
Please Login to post comments| On August 8th 2009 erickagere Said: |
| I think it's great. I really do. You give out what you're feeling and I can picture it in my mind. Alien face says +) |
| On August 8th 2009 ThruOnesEyes Said: |
| 'i know you can do better'; so, you know she can feel the pain in her heart more deeper & subject herself to express that type of pain just for points & us to like it & relate to it? ook. |
| On August 8th 2009 jirrith2007 Said: |
| this poem wasn't thought out... it was spur of the moment... just posted it cuz i felt like it. I kno its deffa not my best, but eh, I just had to get this out |
| On August 8th 2009 Fairiesrule112 Said: |
| hmm..i wont lie jills, i know you can do better, but i liked it :) |
