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fun!! tell me what you reaaalllly thinkRate this Poem
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Created:
06/22 2007
Views:
116
Category:
Anger
My Poems
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her |
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things i wish i could do |
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changes |
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truth |
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murdering brother |
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the last word is the title |
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one bullet |
murdering brother
a singular supposition for you
a dissention in the ranks
the death of a prodigal son
all wealth and privilege
careless freak killer chances
chance posh living
lose love gain bitter gruel
wallow in pity please dont stop
youve done it big brother
remember your seething eyes
dripping with hate and vice
mixed in tear form
then you tear the flesh from his bones
the tumultious rage that drives you
kills you ...inside
in your cell you die
die and let rats make dung out of you
o sorrowful brother
o dreadful dear dear brother
Please Login to post comments| On June 24th 2007 johntyrel Said: |
| the last comment was my mother.. not me commenting on myself lol |
| On June 24th 2007 johntyrel Said: |
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| dark |
| On June 23rd 2007 hardcorpschick Said: |
| hm! do likethis. |
| On June 22nd 2007 kantokah Said: |
| this is cool. great job. luv the end, i got lost for a moment but got a kick out of the end |
