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ik its suxs like all my poemsRate this Poem
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Created:
02/02 2009
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92
Category:
Love
My Poems
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9
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FRIENDS |
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5
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my love |
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5
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heartbroken |
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3
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love, is confusion |
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you have my heart!! |
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4
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DEADLY LOVE |
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4
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NOW I KNOW!!! |
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3
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TEARS OF ICE |
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3
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NOW YOUR GONE |
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2
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lies |
my love
i love my boyfriend he is my love my world my light and most importantly he has my heart its all for my love so why is love so hard i cant say just trust your love like i shouldve trusted mine
Please Login to post comments| On April 2nd 2009 UnSane420 Said: |
| this isnt bad but i agree with tansgenic i think if you added for emotion to it and maybe make it longer i think you will change your mind...but yeah its not bad your off to a good start |
| On February 3rd 2009 transgenic Said: |
| This is a great start. First of all, it'd be easier to read if you formatted it in different lines, like most people on here do. I'd like to see you go into more detail about what it is that you love about your boyfriend and what makes love so hard. But seriously, this is not bad. |
