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Created:
02/15 2008
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269
Category:
Fear
My Poems
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26
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To the Beginning |
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17
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Becoming a one |
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15
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Wherever you go |
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17
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Who is that man |
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20
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Who will I become? |
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23
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Don't let go |
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26
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Looking back |
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21
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Killer at heart |
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19
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Tucked away |
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17
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Unfortunate addiction |
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15
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Reality Show |
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17
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Secrets of Beneath |
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29
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Sour sweet taste |
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16
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Keyless |
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Free Hugs |
Risk
A feeling developing inside
Perhaps the hilight of my life
Or the pathway to never-ending Hell
Stumped with soles intact to the ground
Wondering which would be right
And what would be wrong
Either way
Could step me into the right place
Or be sunk into the ground
Burdened with indecisiveness
Wondering if there is a way out
Whether it should be risked
And take the chance
Or stand here and fall
A risk
That can be worthwhile
Or will it be a regret
Unable to be undone
Please Login to post comments| On June 1st 2008 kissofasia Said: |
| I enjoy reading your poems....It's about reality and not just about same old feeling....I will try to make one about reality.lol great job. |
| On March 6th 2008 comacozi101 Said: |
| unique, deep, and it makes the reader think about their life. Nice job. Keep me posted in the future. I only check this like every week to 2 weeks so it mayy take me a while to respond. again, you truly did awesome this time :) |
| On February 18th 2008 HumanF17TH Said: |
| love it! love the topic of this too : P "You have to take risks. We will only understand the miracle of life fully when we allow the unexpected to happen." - Paulo Coelho - good work! |
| On February 17th 2008 Thugnastay227 Said: |
| see this is why i love reading ur work....ur good. very good. |
| On February 16th 2008 seekerovtruth Said: |
| I'm a HUGE risk taker myself. My man and I were just talking about that last night. He wants to start a company but in doing so he may burn his bridges behind him. I'm like exit as gracefully as possible but if leaving is gonna burn a bridge, hand me a match and I'll light the fire. lol Burn baby burn. Sometimes if you have no way to go back to what you had it forces you to move forward. Succeed or Parish! |
| On February 15th 2008 morbidangel585 Said: |
| i love it. some risks to make u wonder if itll be better in the end or worse than it was. only one way to find out, but hopefully its for the best. i loved this by the way =] |
| On February 15th 2008 assumetheworst Said: |
| wow, that was awsome, i love how you wrote it, damn i vish i could write like that :) great job :D |
