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Created: 06/19 2008
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Category: Other

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This is the feast

The feast of victory

The victory of man kind

 

Man kind will eventually die

And I shall live

Live till another tomorrow

 

My day will come

When the tomorrow doesn’t apply

And I shall look upon the stars

 

The stars that worship the many

The many that I worship also

And I will linger along

 

With my left foot in front

My right foot gone

My eyes a feasting

 

The hunger devouring out of others souls

Tears welling up in my eyes

Celebration has finally come along

 

I have achieved

The killings of the devil and his daughters and sons

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On June 24th 2008 kissofasia Said: 
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I love the thought of it...And i have to agree with you.Please keep me posted...
On June 20th 2008 JakeBozz Said: 
JakeBozz ill stop commenting.
On June 20th 2008 JakeBozz Said: 
JakeBozz ever notice how people say "this is great" and "this is interesting" or "I like it" or "kmp" yet they never say WHY they like it or how they dig it or relate whatever!? Vague asses.
On June 20th 2008 Thugnastay227 Said: 
Thugnastay227 wow.....this is great and easily one the best i've read from u darling. i'd say more but i should have been in bed long ago. suffice to say i was heavily impressed with what i just read.
On June 19th 2008 JakeBozz Said: 
JakeBozz intersting comment for an interesting poem from an interesting mind
On June 19th 2008 lisaljb Said: 
lisaljb Interesting comment Jake Bozz! :)
On June 19th 2008 JakeBozz Said: 
JakeBozz Please allow me to introduce myself Im a man of wealth and taste Ive been around for a long, long year Stole many a mans soul and faith And I was round when jesus christ Had his moment of doubt and pain Made damn sure that pilate Washed his hands and sealed his fate Pleased to meet you Hope you guess my name But whats puzzling you Is the nature of my game I stuck around st. petersburg When I saw it was a time for a change Killed the czar and his ministers Anastasia screamed in vain I rode a tank Held a generals rank When the blitzkrieg raged And the bodies stank Pleased to meet you Hope you guess my name, oh yeah Ah, whats puzzling you Is the nature of my game, oh yeah I watched with glee While your kings and queens Fought for ten decades For the gods they made I shouted out, Who killed the kennedys? When after all It was you and me Let me please introduce myself Im a man of wealth and taste And I laid traps for troubadours Who get killed before they reached bombay Pleased to meet you Hope you guessed my name, oh yeah But whats puzzling you Is the nature of my game, oh yeah, get down, baby Pleased to meet you Hope you guessed my name, oh yeah But whats confusing you Is just the nature of my game Just as every cop is a criminal And all the sinners saints As heads is tails Just call me lucifer cause Im in need of some restraint So if you meet me Have some courtesy Have some sympathy, and some taste Use all your well-learned politesse Or Ill lay your soul to waste, um yeah Pleased to meet you Hope you guessed my name, um yeah But whats puzzling you Is the nature of my game, um mean it, get down Woo, who Oh yeah, get on down Oh yeah Oh yeah! Tell me baby, whats my name Tell me honey, can ya guess my name Tell me baby, whats my name I tell you one time, youre to blame Ooo, who Ooo, who Ooo, who Ooo, who, who Ooo, who, who Ooo, who, who Ooo, who, who Oh, yeah Whats me name Tell me, baby, whats my name Tell me, sweetie, whats my name Ooo, who, who Ooo, who, who Ooo, who, who Ooo, who, who Ooo, who, who Ooo, who, who Ooo, who, who Oh, yeah
On June 19th 2008 CharTheKnight Said: 
CharTheKnight Love the format. I think it's interesting how (on most stanzas) you started the second line with the last word of the previous line. Very much full of emotion and I like how you put in the last two lines.