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Created:
06/25 2008
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233
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Other
My Poems
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26
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To the Beginning |
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17
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Becoming a one |
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15
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Wherever you go |
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17
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Who is that man |
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20
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Who will I become? |
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23
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Don't let go |
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26
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Looking back |
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21
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Killer at heart |
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19
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Tucked away |
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17
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Unfortunate addiction |
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15
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Reality Show |
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17
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Secrets of Beneath |
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29
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Sour sweet taste |
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16
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Keyless |
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20
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Free Hugs |
Suicidal Hope
My hopes
My dreams
Twisted with reality
My tears
My fears
All are becoming clear
The dread
Is fed
My soul seems dead
My life with light
Has taken its flight
At last
My past
Went aghast
The knife
The rope
Are a suicidal hope
For a dope
Please Login to post comments| On July 7th 2008 vernathome Said: |
| This is great, it is the first I've read from you and I am impressed , I will look forward to reading more of your art. yes I called it art. |
| On June 30th 2008 Liz912 Said: |
| It's pretty good, keep up the work!
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| On June 27th 2008 kissofasia Said: |
| loved it,very nice and greatly written....and of course i understand it |
| On June 27th 2008 765433 Said: |
| i like it. good job =] |
| On June 25th 2008 morbidangel585 Said: |
| i really like how u wrote this one..its intersting. i like it =] |
| On June 25th 2008 Thugnastay227 Said: |
| intriguing......hmmm can be taken a couple of ways. either way i like it. |
| On June 25th 2008 xX1ncINalifeXx Said: |
| i like it :) |
| On June 25th 2008 xX1ncINalifeXx Said: |
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| i like it :) |
| On June 25th 2008 CharTheKnight Said: |
| I LOVE IT! This is the best format I've seen in a long time! (I normally just say 'nice format' to say something) but this is awesome! I love the consonance and assonance and alliteration! :D |
| On June 25th 2008 lisaljb Said: |
| I hope everyone understands this poem! Lol! |
