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My Poems
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To the Beginning |
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17
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Becoming a one |
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15
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Wherever you go |
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Who is that man |
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20
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Who will I become? |
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Don't let go |
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Looking back |
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Killer at heart |
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Tucked away |
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Unfortunate addiction |
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Reality Show |
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Secrets of Beneath |
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Sour sweet taste |
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Keyless |
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Free Hugs |
Planet life
You and your world
Many miles away from mine
Different shape, different size
But yet you let the sun shine
You shatter my world with your darkness
As I shatter yours with mine
You let your world revolve
Upside down
And downside up
As do mine
My world isn't picture perfect
You'll see it has physical and emotional troubles
Be alert, it may become attached to you
My world’s inner core is ridiculously melty and hot
Don't even attempt to break in
The burning eventually will kill you
My world is individuality
My world has many moons
My world is 90% water, 2% land, 8% love, and 100% is dedicated to you.
Your world may be different then mine
But we share significant details of life
As you use my water because your planet is lack there of
I use your love, land and you dedicate your 100% to I
Different worlds
Different shapes and size
We may not be able to combine
Yet
To the world you may be a world, but to my world
You are life
Please Login to post comments| On November 15th 2009 Zerosblack Said: |
| could be better |
| On November 29th 2008 max5892 Said: |
| haha its cute. love the whole planet metaphor lol. "90% water, 2% land, 8% love, and 100% dedicated to you". best line EVER lol |
| On November 24th 2008 morbidangel585 Said: |
| very cool, i love the 100% part..it was cute. but this was fun to read =] |
| On November 24th 2008 Thugnastay227 Said: |
| this is very surreal and different from ur norm. a very abstract way to write a poem. i like the expirement. very cool |
