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To the Beginning |
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Becoming a one |
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Wherever you go |
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Who is that man |
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Who will I become? |
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Don't let go |
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Looking back |
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Killer at heart |
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Tucked away |
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Unfortunate addiction |
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Reality Show |
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Secrets of Beneath |
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Sour sweet taste |
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Keyless |
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Free Hugs |
Mistaken Identity
Horrible feelings die upon my lips
Arose from the grave the sun shines in new age
I find myself upon screams of turmoil not yet known
You brought me into an era I have not found
Era of pure destiny defined by my intricate grave of feelings
Concealed eternally in a world of bound
You held me in crisis without a reasonable explanation
A crisis unearned by me nonetheless
Achievement has broke my steadfast ground
Confessional wisdom preached from thy
Nose tingles from the feel of a worn out kiss
A bundle of breath forges its significant sign
As I’ve lurk before you without evidence of endangerment
Spurious sight tattered by moments of regretful insights
You held me properly without a touch of actions or your incredible works
I collide with mercy that quietly sings my suicide song
Shadowing me from left to right
Shocking thoughts formed inside my mind
Even at the worst possible times, mistaken identity can be a fortunate find
Please Login to post comments| On August 19th 2009 NitneyRenee Said: |
| Wow... just... wow! I'm not sure what to say, I think this just proved you have REAL talent. And, from me... that's saying a lot. |
| On August 7th 2009 sixtiespixie Said: |
| Woah. This was dizzy pretty. I like it :) |
| On June 12th 2009 music4lifekep Said: |
| i love it. it's very well written and definately gets the point across. great job. |
| On January 11th 2009 max5892 Said: |
| wow. it has great flow, and i love your word choice. awsome job! |
| On January 9th 2009 charissa14 Said: |
| wow ... breathtaking and amazing :o ... i rlly love the line "I collide with mercy that quietly sings my suicide song." |
| On January 9th 2009 yorkiedude27 Said: |
| Wow, It's phenonmenal. Being able to write and not have to think about it is truly a talent. You're a natural writer (: |
| On January 9th 2009 Thugnastay227 Said: |
| what i told u about this yesterday verbatim |
| On January 9th 2009 Kymburleighx3 Said: |
| ohh, sent chills down my spine. Truely captivating. |
| On January 9th 2009 GreatRomancess Said: |
| Wow. I'm with gangstasam, lol. I REALLY like this. |
| On January 9th 2009 GangstaSam89 Said: |
| WOW I LIKE IT |
| On January 9th 2009 lisaljb Said: |
| When I typed this, it was amazing on how some of my words that flew to my mind was typed out, instead my fingers typed something different. Odd but true. You probably won't understand which is fine, I had to read it a few times until I realized what it was about. :) Try it sometime if you haven't already, put your head down and type! |
