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My Poems
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To the Beginning |
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17
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Becoming a one |
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Wherever you go |
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Who is that man |
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Who will I become? |
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Don't let go |
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Looking back |
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Killer at heart |
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Tucked away |
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Unfortunate addiction |
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Reality Show |
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Secrets of Beneath |
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Sour sweet taste |
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Keyless |
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Free Hugs |
Pieces of the Torn
I cross these two lines
One red
The other yellow
Fingers latched together
Behind my back
Silently praying
As rays of gold slowly cross the two lines
Grasping my skin
Blinding my eyes
Stumbling forward
Rapid breaths
Heart rate soars
One blink
In between two lines
One red
The other yellow
Twisting and turning
The gold shine won’t let go
Pushing me a step forward
The strength weakens my grasp on reality
I fight hard to let go
I want both
Stepping back
My mind thrusts
My hand licks the gold
Splattering it
I jump back before it recoils
Across the red line I go
Blood thirst emotions roar with rage
Dashing for the yellow
The gold holds my throat
Tumbling further into the darkness
I inhaled my last
While the red dust exhales its own
Determination and Strength
Prove its worth
Breaking through the gold
Reaching the yellow line
I collapsed
While the yellow and red combine
And the gold vanishes with evil fury it withholds
The gold is beauty with a lie as dark as the black line of its own
| On August 19th 2009 NitneyRenee Said: |
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| I like this... I especially love how it makes me think. |
| On August 7th 2009 sixtiespixie Said: |
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| To me... It's like the gold and yellow being the safe hiding zone for comfort. Then the red shows the reality that scares us. I loved it. |
| On July 1st 2009 lisaljb Said: |
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| Yeah I was shooting for interpretation.
Interpretate however you want.
I try to do that with a lot of my poems. |
| On July 1st 2009 morbidangel585 Said: |
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| i like this. very intriguing. =] |
| On July 1st 2009 lisaljb Said: |
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| Hard to explain. |


