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I don't want to taste.

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Created: 07/28 2009
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Category: Fear

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The Forbidden Gate

I can't conentrate on the truth

The truth that shallows the soul

The soul

Poisoned and controlled

Omen possessed

Bloodlust mesh

Fuck this mess

Dagger dear

Come on here

The tip of blade

Oozing blood from the skin

Enjoying the pain

Watch me grin

I'll be the bait

For the devils date

I'll play his way

Take his name

Clutching my cross

And say

God be my heroe

Rescue the truth

From my soul

Save my skin

I wanna escape from the devil's gates

Guide me through yours

Give me your hand

It'll be our chore

Hurry before

I take the wrong turn again

Every lose

Every fight

Comes with a knife

Every end

Isn't a friend

Everyday

It's in pain

My dagger dear

Holding its end

In my skin

I'll place a bet

No regrets

Let's refresh

Did I forget?


Every thought I had

Every mind I've grown

Every thing in between

Finished

In the ashes of blood

Of the dagger burned away

Tears lessen its fall

As I walked away

From the memories

Of the forbidden gate

 

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On August 19th 2009 NitneyRenee Said: 
NitneyRenee wow, pretty good. The form throws me off a little bit, but not bad.
On August 6th 2009 sixtiespixie Said: 
sixtiespixie I like it. It's kinda edgy and honest. I think it would be a cool song.
On July 28th 2009 lisaljb Said: 
lisaljb Comments/Criticism Please!!!