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madmarcus

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Lyrical Bitter Rain Type Thing

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Created: 07/06 2008

Views: 293

Category: Pain

My Poems

+ 23	Black Curtains
+ 30	Requiem
+ 25	Out of the Corner of My Mind
+ 13	Not this time
+ 13	Autumn Rain
+ 20	Shadow Psalm
+ 13	Clockwork Dream (Pinochio's lament)
+ 13	Clockwork Angel (Sex in a Snow Globe)
+ 5	The Slaughter of the Autumnal Equinox

Autumn Rain

Shaking frightfully

And I have been chosen

To walk the dark side

Far from the light

Oh in your sorrowed eyes

My life reflects

Where I turned away

Into the autumn rain

Drowned back in all my shame

Wash my fears all away

This time I’ll pray

So fall autumn rain

To blinded to find you

So I’ll escape you

Farther away

Far from your gaze

And all you’ve told me

I must remember

But not today

So fall autumn rain

Wash away all that is sane

Take with you all of this pain

I’ll feel lighter some how

Brighter from now on

Lost in dismal gray

So fall autumn rain.

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On July 9th 2009 rhianeptune Said:


	i don't understand: "and all you've told me, i must remember, but not today"..? i can picture this being sung in a raspy voice by an irish man in his early thirties with a slow acoustic melody in the background. or maybe the music gets joyful towards the end. and maybe there are light bells chiming. maybe i'll shove this sponge up your nose for no apparent reason ONLY TO HAVE IT SWELL UP AND DEVOUR YOUR NOSE. it's a really beautiful poem

On March 6th 2009 servantofall36 Said:


	Rainwater is cleansing.

On August 7th 2008 UnSane420 Said:


	this is a beautiful poem i like it i love the line "so fall autumn rain..." and "wash away all that is sane..." these lines stuck to me i love this poem!

On August 3rd 2008 bayleebroken Said:


	i really like this.

On August 2nd 2008 Calypso32 Said:


	Repetition manages to bring this crips poem home, I loved the reference to autumn, it is a refreshing analogy.~L

On July 14th 2008 DarkSide1477 Said:


	sweet, awesome job bro

On July 12th 2008 o0JustAGirl0o Said:


	what a beautiful poem. you're really good. i love this