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Bloodbending

Views (161) Other Created on 11-10-07 Flag

As the full moon shines on me

The power courses through my veins

I now control the streams and rivers

And the ocean's waves

 

And you my victim, laying still

Down there on the cold hard ground

You cannot move a muscle

Because my bending has you bound

 

The blood that flows through you

Is under my control

Every muscle, every cell

All but your mind and soul

 

I can make you do my bidding

Or I can kill you here

You insignificant firebender

Like those I fight and fear

 

But now as the full moon shines

And your blood and muscles I command

I will use my bloodbending

To kill you where you stand

 

And you my little firebender

On the ground, alive no more

The first of many of your people

To fall victim to my war

 

 

 

 

 

 

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On December 19th 2008 Lovelyeyes0 Said :
Lovelyeyes0 couldn't the water benders just rip ur blood from ur body?
On November 9th 2008 max5892 Said :
max5892 it IS about avatar...
On November 9th 2008 Apocolyptica Said :
Apocolyptica Reminds me of the Avatar. I absolutely love the Avatar. Blood bending would be so fucking cool. Though I do like the Prince on the Fire bender side, all in all, I like it.
On September 1st 2008 deadpoet Said :
deadpoet this is my favorite so far out of your poems posted in 2007. im still reading though =)
On August 25th 2008 Iamaparadox Said :
Iamaparadox i thought water benders were peaceful...wait, are blood bending and water bending the same thing???? b/c there's water in the blood so i can understand how you could control the blood, but . . . i've lost myself 0.0
On August 11th 2008 wannahug13 Said :
wannahug13 SUH-WEET!!!
On August 3rd 2008 m3LLyH3r01n3 Said :
m3LLyH3r01n3 i lov the darkness in this poem. very creative.
On June 28th 2008 muse4apoem Said :
muse4apoem Not your best one but I like how creative it is.
On April 18th 2008 JWalker2406 Said :
JWalker2406 This one is good too! I love the ending :) Very good, seems to me that you are getting better ;)
On December 29th 2007 transgenic Said :
transgenic Great imagery and choice of words!
On December 20th 2007 Smarties4 Said :
Smarties4 Awesome! This one is great too! :)
On November 11th 2007 WaitingAlone Said :
WaitingAlone wow thats really good. i could picture it too.