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Lady of the Sea

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Lady, Lady of the sea

Out of the ocean, come to me

Let the sea waves lick your skin

Your beautiful body, guilty of sin

 

Many a man is drawn by your lust

Even at first sight, have you he must

But he will only end up on the ocean bed

To Davy Jones' Locker he will be sent

 

Come to me lady, here under the stars

Under the moon and venus and mars

I deserve one last pleasure before my life's done

Anyway, soon, my time will come

 

Better I leave with one night of pleasure

With one good night, with one last treasure

Than await my end with misery and woe

For up until now, my life has been so

 

Lady Lady, come to me

Lady, I must conquer thee

And then, my lady of the waves

Take me to my watery grave

 

 

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On November 16th 2008 Thugnastay227 Said :
Thugnastay227 I like how u use the fantasy approach to delve into the things than often consume even the best of us
On November 15th 2008 watrgrl Said :
watrgrl this is a really cool poem!
On November 9th 2008 Apocolyptica Said :
Apocolyptica theme*
On November 9th 2008 Apocolyptica Said :
Apocolyptica I like the whole oceanic sea watery them going on with the poem and the play on words. This is my favourite. It's like the sea is the last of life, and is the only life lived before gently going to bay. -Kudos-
On October 13th 2008 Lovelyeyes0 Said :
Lovelyeyes0 Ayie. I like it. This is all I can say. I tip my hat to thee, your talent rivals my own, I have no true feedback to give here...
On October 13th 2008 summagirl15 Said :
summagirl15 aw thats very good!!
On September 2nd 2008 Dragonbourne Said :
Dragonbourne wow this is amazing i love it its to me romantic very nice
On September 2nd 2008 DarkSide1477 Said :
DarkSide1477 wow very cool dude love the ending and the water motif
On September 1st 2008 deadpoet Said :
deadpoet hey, wait, i already read this lol
On September 1st 2008 deadpoet Said :
deadpoet this was definitely amazing. had me like, "woah" your wordplay is brilliant.
On August 30th 2008 LeahLive Said :
LeahLive Utterly mesmerizing.
On August 26th 2008 Autumnr1 Said :
Autumnr1 sweet!! it was definally good
On August 26th 2008 justjetjustis Said :
justjetjustis thats kewl
On August 26th 2008 LostInHerEyes9 Said :
LostInHerEyes9 nice message i liked the overall poem
On August 25th 2008 alexioso94 Said :
alexioso94 this is a pretty poem i like it!!!=)
On August 25th 2008 Smarties4 Said :
Smarties4 Amazing job! 'tis awesome :)
On August 25th 2008 WaitingAlone Said :
WaitingAlone ooo me like. Thats really good max
On August 25th 2008 deadpoet Said :
deadpoet hey, you're actually a really good poet lol
On August 25th 2008 JWalker2406 Said :
JWalker2406 As always I hate you for making such beautiful poems.... :P Love it
On August 25th 2008 wannahug13 Said :
wannahug13 it's like a mixture between a siren and the sea itsself. very cool! love it.
On August 25th 2008 muse4apoem Said :
muse4apoem Left me speechless! It's just so good! Your quite the writer. ~Kudos~
On August 24th 2008 coolkidrockout Said :
coolkidrockout wow i really like it. it is really good. amazing job kid. =]