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Angel of Darkness

Inspired by DarkSide1477's story "The Channeler" which you should all go read because it's fuckin fantastic!

 

Angel of Darkness, Spirit of the Night

Bringing the black hand of sorrow to all in his sight

For all around him fall into a perilous depression

Sinking into the fatal abyss of anger and agression

 

Reaper in hand, some say he's the bringer of death

He forces those around him into the dark realm of Seth

The underworld where Demons rule among the flames

Torturing souls and playing their evil games

 

Anyone he encounters begins to see black

Happy memories gone, now cheerfulness they lack

Nothing but the saddest moments of their lives

Come back to haunt them, enough to make anyone cry

 

All around him crumble, a psychological darkness engulfing them

Their minds black like tar, they turn and vow to serve him

There is nothing left of the joy these zombies once felt

Thanks to the Angel of Darkness, away the happiness melts

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On September 6th 2009 godsbluejay Said: 
godsbluejay i think the last two lines are my fave :) lol nice
On December 20th 2008 transgenic Said: 
transgenic I love the last stanza. Great work, as always.
On November 30th 2008 deadpoet Said: 
deadpoet You've gotten so good at writing, the words seem to just flow out and the imagery has always been great. Fantastic poem.
On November 30th 2008 lisaljb Said: 
lisaljb I'm the Angel of Light! ;)
On November 28th 2008 muse4apoem Said: 
muse4apoem How did I miss this? idk God this is fantastic. :)
On November 23rd 2008 Realmuckoy Said: 
Realmuckoy Sick flow! :) Great job man!
On November 23rd 2008 JWalker2406 Said: 
JWalker2406 Awesome poem!!!! Really like the words you use, send shivers down your spine. And I will totally go read Darkside's story now because of this haha, when I got time. Which I should because Thanksgiving weekend is coming up :D
On November 23rd 2008 Lovelyeyes0 Said: 
Lovelyeyes0 man.. u scare me. i read a little ways into this... and then stop. cuz i like to think of u as a good little jewish kid. :P Good poem.
On November 21st 2008 Smarties4 Said: 
Smarties4 Love it! Can definitely see its inspired by the story! Great writing as always!!!! :)
On November 21st 2008 DarkSide1477 Said: 
DarkSide1477 im touched at being mentioned in such high regard tho, ty =)
On November 21st 2008 DarkSide1477 Said: 
DarkSide1477 oo wow rite up my alley, u HAVE been reading my stuff... this is what i do to ppl =P and thers a charecter, a channeler the details of which i wnt reveal but hes similar to wat u described, unfortantly he wnt b making an entrance 4 awhile