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Angel of Darkness
Inspired by DarkSide1477's story "The Channeler" which you should all go read because it's fuckin fantastic!
Angel of Darkness, Spirit of the Night
Bringing the black hand of sorrow to all in his sight
For all around him fall into a perilous depression
Sinking into the fatal abyss of anger and agression
Reaper in hand, some say he's the bringer of death
He forces those around him into the dark realm of Seth
The underworld where Demons rule among the flames
Torturing souls and playing their evil games
Anyone he encounters begins to see black
Happy memories gone, now cheerfulness they lack
Nothing but the saddest moments of their lives
Come back to haunt them, enough to make anyone cry
All around him crumble, a psychological darkness engulfing them
Their minds black like tar, they turn and vow to serve him
There is nothing left of the joy these zombies once felt
Thanks to the Angel of Darkness, away the happiness melts
| On September 6th 2009 godsbluejay Said: |
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| i think the last two lines are my fave :) lol nice |
| On December 20th 2008 transgenic Said: |
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| I love the last stanza. Great work, as always. |
| On November 30th 2008 deadpoet Said: |
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| You've gotten so good at writing, the words seem to just flow out and the imagery has always been great. Fantastic poem. |
| On November 30th 2008 lisaljb Said: |
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| I'm the Angel of Light! ;) |
| On November 28th 2008 muse4apoem Said: |
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| How did I miss this? idk God this is fantastic. :) |
| On November 23rd 2008 Realmuckoy Said: |
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| Sick flow! :) Great job man! |
| On November 23rd 2008 JWalker2406 Said: |
| On November 23rd 2008 Lovelyeyes0 Said: |
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| man.. u scare me.
i read a little ways into this... and then stop. cuz i like to think of u as a good little jewish kid.
:P
Good poem. |
| On November 21st 2008 Smarties4 Said: |
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| Love it! Can definitely see its inspired by the story! Great writing as always!!!! :) |
| On November 21st 2008 DarkSide1477 Said: |
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| im touched at being mentioned in such high regard tho, ty =) |
| On November 21st 2008 DarkSide1477 Said: |


