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Created:
11/24 2008
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223
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Love
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The Forest
A boy walks through the woods at night
Every sound gives him a fright
Along a long dark path he walks
Hearing creatures' voices talk
From the trees he hears the voices
Laughter, cackles, howls like a banshee's
Surrounding him from every side
Mocking him like a little child
The boy starts running, attempting to flee
But still he cannot evade the voices in the trees
"Run little boy, Run far away
We will eat you if you stay"
The boy runs faster, faster ,faster
But shadows begin to gain, egged on by their master
"Get the boy, fresh meat for all!"
Chants the loudest voice of all
A tree swings its branch in the boy's path
A stake through his lungs, he takes his last gasp
He is swallowed by the gaining shadows
The boy's remains will never be found.
| On December 20th 2008 transgenic Said: |
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| Good imagery, it kind of pops out of the computer screen (if that makes sense). |
| On December 6th 2008 ljay33 Said: |
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| real nice dude!! great |
| On November 30th 2008 gonzo4201 Said: |
| On November 30th 2008 lisaljb Said: |
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| Sounds like a story indeed, I'm intrigued. |
| On November 27th 2008 muse4apoem Said: |
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| I thought it was a wonderful story. The ending I agree was a little off. But you really had a strond start. |
| On November 25th 2008 max5892 Said: |
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| yea, deffinitely not my best work |
| On November 25th 2008 JWalker2406 Said: |
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| Pretty good :) not your best though :P Didn't really flow and the ending seemed rushed haha, but that is just meh!! You are still great though |
| On November 25th 2008 Lovelyeyes0 Said: |
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| oh no, maybe i didn't. don't post shit so fast.
good write, not much point to it. just shows the depths of how hopelessly sad u r.
:D |
| On November 24th 2008 servantofall36 Said: |
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| Wow. So whimsical, but didn't see that ending coming! hahahahahahaha. |
| On November 24th 2008 DarkSide1477 Said: |
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| its great but so sad =( |


