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The Forest

A boy walks through the woods at night

Every sound gives him a fright

Along a long dark path he walks

Hearing creatures' voices talk

 

From the trees he hears the voices

Laughter, cackles, howls like a banshee's

Surrounding him from every side

Mocking him like a little child

 

The boy starts running, attempting to flee

But still he cannot evade the voices in the trees

"Run little boy, Run far away

We will eat you if you stay"

 

The boy runs faster, faster ,faster

But shadows begin to gain, egged on by their master

"Get the boy, fresh meat for all!"

Chants the loudest voice of all

 

A tree swings its branch in the boy's path

A stake through his lungs, he takes his last gasp

He is swallowed by the gaining shadows

The boy's remains will never be found.

 

 

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On December 20th 2008 transgenic Said: 
transgenic Good imagery, it kind of pops out of the computer screen (if that makes sense).
On December 6th 2008 ljay33 Said: 
ljay33 real nice dude!! great
On November 30th 2008 gonzo4201 Said: 
gonzo4201 Why did you ask me to skip this? I have longbeen a fan of fantasy stories and this was rather masterful... But, I have to agree with the muse...the ending was a bit forced... all around nice job though...
On November 30th 2008 lisaljb Said: 
lisaljb Sounds like a story indeed, I'm intrigued.
On November 27th 2008 muse4apoem Said: 
muse4apoem I thought it was a wonderful story. The ending I agree was a little off. But you really had a strond start.
On November 25th 2008 max5892 Said: 
max5892 yea, deffinitely not my best work
On November 25th 2008 JWalker2406 Said: 
JWalker2406 Pretty good :) not your best though :P Didn't really flow and the ending seemed rushed haha, but that is just meh!! You are still great though
On November 25th 2008 Lovelyeyes0 Said: 
Lovelyeyes0 oh no, maybe i didn't. don't post shit so fast. good write, not much point to it. just shows the depths of how hopelessly sad u r. :D
On November 24th 2008 servantofall36 Said: 
servantofall36 Wow. So whimsical, but didn't see that ending coming! hahahahahahaha.
On November 24th 2008 DarkSide1477 Said: 
DarkSide1477 its great but so sad =(