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12/06 2008
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Fear
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Oceanlore
On a cliff, above the waves
Is where the siren spends her days
She sits and sings beneath the sky
Luring sailors with her cry
A mermaid sits on the rocks below
Ginger hair and skin like snow
Listening to the siren's song
Waiting for prey to come along
And in the caves off to the side
There lives a creature so despised
It never sees the light of day
He who nears it will have his life to pay
In the air around these shores
A spirit watches as he soars
The many creatures that prey on men
He sees the ship aproaching then
A bashful sailor seeks the coast
To escape the storm is what he wants most
But what awaits him near the shore?
The flesh-loving creatures of human lore.
Please Login to post comments| On July 14th 2009 MauiWowies Said: |
| Hmmm, what to say. I loed the details put into it The only thing is that there wasnt much detail aout the actual event of the aslior getting killed. |
| On December 21st 2008 chaotickitty12 Said: |
| aw, maxi pad, that was beautiful. |
| On December 20th 2008 transgenic Said: |
| I love this. |
| On December 19th 2008 Lovelyeyes0 Said: |
| dayyyuuuuum boi, that was good shit. |
| On December 17th 2008 whiskey1011 Said: |
| Great poem. And I think the ending is clever. |
| On December 13th 2008 LittlKiraDemon Said: |
| I completely disagree with Gonzo, the ending was great!!! Beautiful work! |
| On December 13th 2008 MauiWowies Said: |
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| awsome if I do say so myself |
| On December 8th 2008 deadpoet Said: |
| once again, beautiful |
| On December 7th 2008 gonzo4201 Said: |
| ending seems a bit abrupt, but overall good... |
| On December 7th 2008 speederspider Said: |
| Maxie these are so mystical. I need to draw you a mermaid:) |
| On December 7th 2008 lisaljb Said: |
| I'm impressed, this poem flowed well with beauty of the poem itself. Well done! |
| On December 7th 2008 Smarties4 Said: |
| lol at Darkside's comment :P Awesome poem, I absolutely love it!!!!!!!!! :D |
| On December 7th 2008 DarkSide1477 Said: |
| y not write sumthing bout a creature that dsnt want to kill us? |
| On December 6th 2008 muse4apoem Said: |
| Reminds me of Gonzo's poem a lot. So I really like it. :) |
| On December 6th 2008 JWalker2406 Said: |
| Again amazing...I just love your imagination. It's awesome! |
| On December 6th 2008 Relica123 Said: |
| This is very Good. :D |
| On December 6th 2008 heavenangel93 Said: |
| Wow. This poem is amazing. |
