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My tribute to gothic metalRate this Poem
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Created:
12/19 2008
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232
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Passion
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Gothica
Haunting choirs, left and right
A woman in black leads them through the night
Her enchanting voice singing a tune
To the air, to the stars, and to the glowing full moon
A song about love, a song about hate
A melody about our fate
A sound that defines the meaning of "epic"
This is the esence of what we call "gothic"
A dark magic that reaches your ears
An enticing sound that brings out your fears
A black, enchanting melody
Supported by a darker harmony
A unique style, a wierd combination
Well deserving of a standing ovation
A mix of sounds that drives us into mania
This is our music, this is pure Gothica
Please Login to post comments| On August 19th 2009 lisaljb Said: |
| This is sweet! :D |
| On July 9th 2009 Vexion15 Said: |
| Dude check out my poem "Melody" it would tie in so well with this poem |
| On June 19th 2009 Lapickles1 Said: |
| Un sould so make this a song. I could ad a gothic tune and we could rock to it all day! |
| On January 8th 2009 Lovelyeyes0 Said: |
| interestin. u and i have a fundamental difference. u write for tributes to the temporal and tangible, whereas i often write for the ethereal and unseeable |
| On January 5th 2009 speederspider Said: |
| awesome:) |
| On December 26th 2008 LittlKiraDemon Said: |
| I really like it Mister-Maxy! It's....acceptingly dark with beauty :D |
| On December 24th 2008 gonzo4201 Said: |
| Very much awesome... could feel the electricity flowing through the words,as thy leapt from the page... |
| On December 22nd 2008 DashboardLogic Said: |
| .... I feel like I'm watching Hostel 2... the blood bath scence... but they made a music video... Awesome... |
| On December 21st 2008 DarkSide1477 Said: |
| i agre the imagery in this poem is very good and the darkness about it noteworthy |
| On December 20th 2008 transgenic Said: |
| Really unique. Great imagery. I like! |
| On December 20th 2008 muse4apoem Said: |
| The first four lines were a tad off. It started to pick up once I read into it. Prehaps rewriting those lines would tie it in better. Even if you don't do that I love how creative this is. :) |
| On December 19th 2008 JWalker2406 Said: |
| I agree :) not your best. The flow just wasn't there at times and then before you knew it there it was haha. But again, still a great writing, the imagery is awesome :) |
| On December 19th 2008 sochula777 Said: |
| Oh wow, this is great, I like it, I like it a lot!! (: |
| On December 19th 2008 deadpoet Said: |
| At some points it feels as if the flow went off yet it picked right back up, so I wouldn't say its your best but it is still very well written |
