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01/11 2009
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Fear
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Hellish Fairytale
A forbidden book bound in black
Contains the nightmares from a long time back
It tells of the darkest corners of imagination
From the reader it keeps its ending revelation
A story about a lost boy in the woods
Who's eaten by demons in ravenous moods
Or the tale of a cute little girl
Who falls victim to insanity as the darkness unfurls
Anecdotes of the darkest things
Of ghosts and witches, that only bring
A dark enchantment over all who hear
These stories of death and woe and fear
When we finish these stories of the darkest imagery
We learn that this hellish fairytale is merely our own reality
Please Login to post comments| On February 27th 2009 JWalker2406 Said: |
| Oh this is just great as always :) Everyone seems to like the third stanza but I like the first one...really draws you in :D |
| On February 4th 2009 transgenic Said: |
| I especially love the third stanza. |
| On February 1st 2009 Realmuckoy Said: |
| Great job man! wow, I love the way you use your words and How you make them work so well together :)) kudos |
| On January 15th 2009 Thugnastay227 Said: |
| impressive. lolol and not cause u said it just a sec ago. it pulled me into this forbidden realm uve verbally illustrated here. fantastic |
| On January 15th 2009 BatSpider Said: |
| definitely not your best, but it is good...the third stanza is your usual great writing/flow. |
| On January 14th 2009 Yanks19 Said: |
| haha nice poem maaaaaan |
| On January 13th 2009 speederspider Said: |
| Write this hellish fairytale max. Make it a novel. I swear I will read it from cover to cover and buy it! It sounds bad ass! |
| On January 12th 2009 huronpliskin Said: |
| gaddamn you! its pretty good XD |
| On January 12th 2009 gonzo4201 Said: |
| Haha... I like that... so very yeah... |
| On January 12th 2009 Smarties4 Said: |
| The last line really has a stunning effect. Brilliant writing! Write more like this and soon! :D |
| On January 11th 2009 muse4apoem Said: |
| Wow this is really good and imaginative. :) |
| On January 11th 2009 DashboardLogic Said: |
| DAMMIT! MY IDEA! not really. I wish it was mine though lol. You could have added more creepy stuff! :O! I really liked it a lot. |
| On January 11th 2009 lisaljb Said: |
| This is greattttttt! I really don't know what to say except I wasn't expecting the last line.
Nice! |
| On January 11th 2009 stitchchick92 Said: |
| I'm not a poetry person, but I guess it's good. lol |
| On January 11th 2009 EdwardRoxMySox Said: |
| this is really good, your very talented. =) |
