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The Desire Within

Desire within me takes me over

Desire for sin like that of Eve

An apple on the tree of life

A fruit I cannot simply leave

 

Animal lust drives my want

A lust for you, a lust for sin

Let me take you, let me taste

What it's like to release the desire within

 

This sin, this wrong, call it what you will

Let's commit it, let's begin it

let me smell you, taste you, feel you

Who cares if God permits it?

 

I beg you, give me what I wish

Just one night, just this one sin

Help me, please help me

To release the desire within

 

 

 

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On September 4th 2009 hiddenlotus Said: 
hiddenlotus lmao hell yeah!! I hate that my girlfreind took this absitence vow..
On August 19th 2009 lisaljb Said: 
lisaljb It's referring to me right? ;)
On June 8th 2009 RomeoInRuin Said: 
RomeoInRuin someones hooooornyyyyy hahaha
On June 2nd 2009 JWalker2406 Said: 
JWalker2406 Lol naughty hehee! I like it, not your best but it is worth the read! Love it :D
On April 6th 2009 DarkSide1477 Said: 
DarkSide1477 reminds me of Lilith =P good work lol very... lustful
On April 5th 2009 Smarties4 Said: 
Smarties4 Great write :) Metaphor is great, style is great, language it great. Just great all round :P
On April 4th 2009 gonzo4201 Said: 
gonzo4201 Loved the metaphors in this... definitely could relate... Great Job...
On April 2nd 2009 innersmiff Said: 
innersmiff Fair play, I know that's all we want :P Nothing silly like love or anything haa Good stuff
On April 2nd 2009 DashboardLogic Said: 
DashboardLogic I thought it was about an apple but apparently I'm wrong. =.=
On April 1st 2009 muse4apoem Said: 
muse4apoem Makes you feel sinful just reading it. lol
On April 1st 2009 Fairiesrule112 Said: 
Fairiesrule112 haha so...its about sex...right?
On April 1st 2009 d0icount Said: 
d0icount very deep