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04/06 2009
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Pain
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The Enemy of My Enemy is My Friend
The enemy of my enemy is my friend
Someone to aid me against whom I contend
Together we'll fight, together we'll defeat
Every army sent by the one with whom we compete
The enemy of my friend is my enemy
From whom we'll defend our sovereignity
Attack my ally, and you attack me
Such pain you've never felt, but oh, you will see!
Yet, sometimes the enemy of my friend is my friend as well
I want to fight neither, and to neither say farewell
But I'm stuck in a pickle, oh what do I do?
Let them settle it among themselves, or take a side too?
Please Login to post comments| On August 19th 2009 lisaljb Said: |
| Makes me think of the CivilWar. |
| On June 17th 2009 Smarties4 Said: |
| This is excellently written. First stanza is my fav :) |
| On June 8th 2009 RomeoInRuin Said: |
| lol i like this one. presents an interesting conundrum. |
| On May 12th 2009 DashboardLogic Said: |
| I know you hate it when I don't leave a comment and I usually don't leave comments on poems I think are "OK". And well yeah. This one is OK to me. |
| On April 12th 2009 gonzo4201 Said: |
| haha... loved how you captured this... how many times have I found myself in this predicament... Excellent job... |
| On April 8th 2009 JWalker2406 Said: |
| Good one :) I really like it! I'm in a pickle hehe. Okay now I commented on your fabulous poem now you need to comment on my crappy chapter of ATFB lol :P |
| On April 7th 2009 NitneyRenee Said: |
| Pretty cool, Max. |
| On April 7th 2009 speederspider Said: |
| oh wow maxie, you need to get this one copyrighted and published before someone steals it. At least insert a watermark because it's fabulous! I can't even think of how it can be improved....maybe more? |
| On April 7th 2009 muse4apoem Said: |
| Not bad Max I liked it. :) |
