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04/22 2009
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Fear
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Lady Death
Walking in the woods at night
You come across a stone-still sprite
Clad in black, she sits alone
For you the seeds of death are sown
They say who sees her leaves this place
To end in Hell or in God's embrace
An omen more vile is hard to find
A mere glimpse of her and your contract's signed.
She comes to you after a time
In your ears will ring death's chime
Prepared to take your life away
She asks if you are ready to pay
Are you ready to give up your life
and to your throat to take a knife?
With Lady Death, will you go?
All you have to say is "No"!
Please Login to post comments| On September 4th 2009 gaia17 Said: |
| wow. that's pretty awesome. ^^ |
| On August 5th 2009 gonzo4201 Said: |
| All you have to sayis No?? Ididn't thinkthere wasa choice in the matter, whenthe time has kome... haha... Nice Flow... Good Job... |
| On July 1st 2009 MauiWowies Said: |
| One of my favs Ive read (though this is only the fourth I think) I love it man, great detail. The only thing is this line
and to your throat to take a knife?
Sounds just a little odd, maybe And to your troat trace this knife or something like that but its still good |
| On June 17th 2009 Smarties4 Said: |
| I have to concede and say that the last stanza could have been improved, seemed rushed compared to the rest of it. The first 3 stanzas are brilliant though :D |
| On June 2nd 2009 JWalker2406 Said: |
| I agree it does leave you hanging at the end. But I love the words, really makes me visualize it :) great job |
| On May 12th 2009 DashboardLogic Said: |
| I agree with Speeder. A different ending would have been better. The imagery was wonderful though. OMG! I saw her in my head! NO! NO! NO! Go away evil lady! :'( |
| On May 2nd 2009 lisaljb Said: |
| Hmmm interesting |
| On April 24th 2009 speederspider Said: |
| I love all of it except the end. |
| On April 23rd 2009 muse4apoem Said: |
| Not to shabby kinda leaves you hanging. |
