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Created:
06/04 2009
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204
Category:
Pain
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The Falling Time
The falling time of the divine
has come this day. The falling shine
of those who fell lights up the land,
yet on this land no graves will stand.
Angels litter the ground below.
their bodies shine the divine glow.
The fallen ones will fall no more.
They're on the ground, their wings they tore.
"They fell first, but I'm still here"
looking down, shedding a tear
for the fallen ones that shine,
that fell during the falling time.
Please Login to post comments| On August 19th 2009 lisaljb Said: |
| Very interesting... hmmmm... |
| On August 5th 2009 gonzo4201 Said: |
| I feel there kould maybe be more to this... |
| On July 1st 2009 MauiWowies Said: |
| Its good man, I like it, the only crit I would say is that it feels really repetatives. IDK if you were going for that but you used the word falling way too much IMO.. JUst throwing it out there as an opinion lol :) |
| On July 1st 2009 HotEmoNerd Said: |
| This is awesome. it's... im speechless! :] |
| On June 25th 2009 Bellaboo09 Said: |
| Good |
| On June 17th 2009 Smarties4 Said: |
| 'that fell during the falling time' = superbly fantastic!! I don't know, that line just really got me. |
| On June 14th 2009 DashboardLogic Said: |
| o.o That was like … freaking awesome Netherplains stuff. I imagined naked broken angels at the bottom of a pit with other angels crying looking down on them in shame. And I laughed because they were stupid. >.> Cause I’m weird like that. |
| On June 11th 2009 JWalker2406 Said: |
| Wow Max...You are just amazing at writing poems :( I hate you....LOL jk :P Love this and I will be surprised if you don't win or at least are in the top! NOW have you read my new poem???? It is no where as great as yours but...I love your critics :) |
| On June 6th 2009 muse4apoem Said: |
| Ooh I can't think of words right now... |
| On June 4th 2009 ViableFate Said: |
| Oh my god!!!!! This is an epic one for me. I like how it's a story. Kind of. Idon'tknow. I like it. THUMBS UP! |
| On June 4th 2009 max5892 Said: |
| eh..stupid formating! |
