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06/14 2009
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Fear
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Save Me!
I call upon thee, God of Rain
Bring the downpour, bring the pain
Wash my soul of all its sins
Before my suffering beings
God of Lightning, God of Thunder
Bring the storm, tear me asunder
Rip me to peices, set my soul free
Tell the dark to leave me be!
Godess of Light, Goddess of Sun
Help me! Save my soul undone
I'm haunted by the devil's curse
Aid me before my fate gets worse
Don't let the devil drag me to hell
My soul is pure, not good to sell
Gods, oh Gods, I pleade with thee
Save my soul and set it free!
Please Login to post comments| On September 6th 2009 godsbluejay Said: |
| seemed* |
| On September 6th 2009 godsbluejay Said: |
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| very kewl....i like it...and same as lisa it seem quick lol |
| On August 19th 2009 lisaljb Said: |
| Very nice!
Felt like a quick poem for me |
| On August 5th 2009 gonzo4201 Said: |
| loved this... |
| On July 29th 2009 JWalker2406 Said: |
| Awesome!! I love the last stanza :) |
| On July 12th 2009 Kymburleighx3 Said: |
| =D |
| On July 12th 2009 Thugnastay227 Said: |
| bravo |
| On July 12th 2009 Kymburleighx3 Said: |
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| :> |
| On July 9th 2009 Vexion15 Said: |
| See I can tell by reading this that certain verses may be for your understanding only....I can't stand when users get picky and try to point out flaws cause they can't make sense of every little thing |
| On July 8th 2009 deadpoet Said: |
| The flow on this is quite amazing, Max. I want to hear a song from you. I bet it'd be good. |
| On July 1st 2009 MauiWowies Said: |
| Its good, I liked it a lot. I liked the comon theme you used and you depicted the different gods and goddesses quite well. |
| On July 1st 2009 max5892 Said: |
| oh shit...i just realized my typo! first stanza, last line, "beings" should be "begins" i swear, i'm becoming dyslexic! |
| On July 1st 2009 HotEmoNerd Said: |
| that's F**kin AWESOME!!! |
| On June 25th 2009 Sunloverz Said: |
| F*cking amazing. |
| On June 17th 2009 Smarties4 Said: |
| Nice work :) |
| On June 15th 2009 Crunkgirl777 Said: |
| wow... youh are really good wow this poem is dank |
| On June 15th 2009 muse4apoem Said: |
| Amazing I love it please write more poems Max, you don't write them enough! :) |
| On June 14th 2009 getcorrupted Said: |
| This is good, now stop spamming! :] |
| On June 14th 2009 megan0massacer Said: |
| i like it.... really good |
| On June 14th 2009 DashboardLogic Said: |
| I likey. It's all... immortalness and awesome. It made Frank cry. >.> |
