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Created:
07/08 2009
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Pain
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Secrets
Have a secret? You keep it well.
No matter what, you'll never tell.
Too ashamed of it to disclose
to anyone. Nobody knows.
Is it worth keeping it hidden?
It's not as if it is forbidden.
Disclosing it will save your soul
From penalty, it's in your control.
You want to spend your life locked up?
All you have to do to make it stop
is tell us this secret of yours,
This thing your hiding. Open your doors!
Wouldn't it just be easier to admit
You have a problem and to overcome it?
Just learn to do it, it's not so hard
Keep your soul from being scarred.
Please Login to post comments| On August 19th 2009 lisaljb Said: |
| This is verrrrrrry interesting... |
| On August 6th 2009 huronpliskin Said: |
| hmmm, i like how you dont reveal what kind of secret it is till the end. at first i thought it was advice, "make sure you keep your secrets" then i thought it was an interrogation "tell us what you know" and now i see its about the secrets that can destroy you... |
| On August 5th 2009 gonzo4201 Said: |
| indeed... the truth shall set you free... sekrets only eat away at yer soul... great Job... |
| On July 29th 2009 JWalker2406 Said: |
| Very good :) But I will admit that I have a hard time saying my problems lol. Guess I should open my doors! :P A good poem Max! |
| On July 10th 2009 speederspider Said: |
| Damn Straight! You must have wrote that for my stupid husband. |
| On July 10th 2009 max5892 Said: |
| You mean Hanna Schmitz? |
| On July 10th 2009 muse4apoem Said: |
| I agree with "Maul" about the reptitous thing. I have to keep telling myself not to do that if the peom doesn't call for it. It's hard to describe how both those characters feelings realy. I forget the woman's name I should look it up cause I have this book. I can tell this poem is mostly about her. |
| On July 9th 2009 Vexion15 Said: |
| Not everything is easy to talk about.....some things need to be kept to yourself |
| On July 9th 2009 MauiWowies Said: |
| Its really cool with a clear message, the only thing I dont like is you used "disclose" twice in the first two stanzas so it felt a bit repetitious. |
